Gearing Up to Revise

Tuesday, March 11, 2025
I have to admit. I told my accountability group that I was going to revise my early middle grade novel, Three Rivers Robotics. But really? I just wasn’t feeling it. 

Ever since Barnes and Noble changed their stocking policy to limit hard covers to only best-selling authors, there has been a lot of angst and anxiety among middle grade authors. Then Ingrams limited the backlist titles that they list. Can we say more angst and anxiety? 

It made it really hard to get myself to work on this particular book, but I powered through the first draft. Now that it is time to revise, every time I go online someone says the middle grade market is dead. That is not exactly the thing to keep a writer motivated. 

But the last three weeks I’ve been too busy to check social media.
Sure, I pop on occasionally and like my husband’s Facebook posts. After all, I do want him to empty the drier. But I haven’t been reading all those other discouraging posts.

I’m not going to give up reading altogether. So I’ve been reading a new middle grade novel. It has taken me just over a week which is really slow for me. But I love the characters. The setting is so real that I can tell you exactly what town inspired it. And the plot hooked me from the start. This book, The Secret of Moonrise Manor by Stephanie Bearce, is a must read if you want to write middle grade fiction. 

What does this have to do with my own motivation?  As I was reading, a thought popped into my head. My main character can still be my main character, and his sidekick is fine too. But other than that? Sorry. Everyone else has got to go. Or they at least need to seek new employment because my setting is no longer Three Rivers Robotics. It is now a science makers space for tweens. Which means there will be a whole new group of secondary tween characters. Of course, all of this means that my plot will need to be adjusted. 

I liked my plot in the first version, but the secondary characters? I never liked them. And I do mean any of them. But I pushed myself through because I just wanted to finish a draft.

I’m glad I did because now I’m thinking about how to improve it. And I’m taking my inspiration from an amazing middle grade book. 

Anxiety is easy to come by right now. And that can make it hard to get deep into a project. My advice to you? Don’t look for inspiration on social media. Instead, pick up something written by an amazing author. Not sure who that would be or what to read? Ask and maybe someone else reading this can help you. There is always someone here reading the most fantastic book that I’ve never heard of. 

--SueBE

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Sue Bradford Edwards' is the author of over 60 books for young readers.  

She is also the instructor for 3 WOW classes which begin on the first Monday of every month. She teaches:

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Interview with Anne Walsh Donnelly Runner Up in the WOW! Q1 2025 Creative Nonfiction Essay Contest with: "Eruption"

Saturday, March 08, 2025
Congratulations, Anne! It is my sincere joy to introduce you to the lovely Anne Walsh Donnelly who is a runner up in the WOW! Q1 2025 Creative Nonfiction Essay Contest with her submission, "Eruption". I interviewed Anne in 2019 (check that out here!) and I'm delighted to be with her again today. Please take a moment to check out her submission as well as all the other talented writers who submitted their work! After you've read "Eruption", pop back here for our engaging interview!

Anne’s Bio:  Anne Walsh Donnelly lives in the west of Ireland, writes prose, poetry and plays and loves to experiment with form in her writing. She is the author of the poetry collections, Odd as F*ck, and The Woman with the Owl Tattoo, both published by Fly on the Wall press. 

Her novel, He Used To Be Me, was published by New Island Books in 2024. Her essays have reached the top 10 in WOW's Creative Nonfiction Essay Contests several times for which she is eternally grateful. 

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Interview by Crystal J. Casavant-Otto

WOW: Thank you for writing such a personal essay and thank you for joining me again today. It's always lovely to be reunited with a long-time friend. Your writing is as always a joy and pleasure. Let me ask you this Anne, what was your intended take-away with writing Eruption? 

Anne:  Thanks to you all at WOW! for publishing it. What is the take-away I’d like readers to gain from reading Eruption? To be honest I don’t have one. What the reader gains from reading this essay is outside of my control. All I can do is hope that it resonates with the reader in some way. 

WOW: That's a great point - thank you for your transparency. Anne, who is your support - what have you found to be most supportive in your writing life as well as in life in general? You are clearly an accomplished author - are there other writers/readers in your life who help you through? 

Anne: I am fortunate to have many supports both in my writing and in life in general. My family of course, particularly my two (now young adult) children. They were quite young with I started writing 13 years ago and I can still remember their excitement when they discovered I was writing. They were planning my first book before I even thought I was capable of writing a book, my daughter was going to design the cover and my son said he’d look after the ‘business’ side of things! I’ve been fortunate too to have encountered many fellow writers who have been very supportive and encouraging and who believed in me even when I didn’t believe in myself. And of course the Creator of all creators has been with me all my life, giving me the strength and courage I needed to make some pretty tough life-changing decisions for both myself and my children. 

WOW: I'm sure your bravery inspired your children and it warms my heart to hear how supportive they are of you and your writing career. This is such a wonderful tidbit about you! What advice would you give to others (specifically females) when it comes to self care, authenticity, and finding their voice?

Anne:  Just be you and don’t get too hung up on all that ‘on-trend’ stuff we’re supposed to be doing, like being authentic and finding our voices. Sometimes doing nothing and just ‘being’ is enough. I nearly killed myself trying to find my voice! What I didn’t realise was that it was already within me, I just needed to give it time to emerge. As for self-care the most loving thing you can do for yourself is to stop doing, stop striving and be as gentle to yourself as you would be to a baby. 

WOW: I love that advice - now we just need to hear and follow it. I admit, the follow through is what's a struggle for me. Hopefully if you say it to me often enough it will eventually sink in!

That said, what’s next for you dear Anne? What are your writing goals for the rest of 2025 and beyond? Do you have a new book on the horizon? 

Anne:  I’ve stepped back from writing for now. I’ve been experiencing some ‘writer burnout’ over the past few months. It’s been hard to accept that I need to take time out but I understand why I need to. I’ve been writing for 13 years, in addition to single parenting my two children, working a day job and coping with chronic pain, and in that time I’ve published two poetry collections, one short story collection and a novel as well as having some of my plays performed. And of course I’ve been successful with my creative personal essays thanks to WOW. So I’ve exhausted myself in more ways than one and now I’m practicing what I preach i.e. spending more time ‘being’ rather than ‘doing’. 

 WOW: I love that you can acknowledge that need and move forward with it. I wonder if that's something that's come with age? Do you have advice for your younger self when it comes to making decisions, believing in yourself, and/or writing? What would your current self say to the younger you? 

Anne: Listen to your inner voice and trust it. Ignore the nagging self-doubt. You are more lovable, more precious and more talented than you think. 

WOW: You give the best advice - thank you again for sharing your wise words with us. Speaking of advice, what advice do you have for others during turbulent times? What works or doesn’t work for you when it comes to dealing with stress and the pressures of everyday life? 

Anne: What works for me is my belief that there is a transcendent force working its magic in the universe. When things are really tough I repeat a quote attributed to the 13th Century English mystic, Mother Julian of Norwich. She says: “All shall be well, and all shall be well, and all manner of thing shall be well…for there is a force of love moving through the universe that holds us fast and will never let us go.” I find the thought that - there is a force of love moving through the universe and holding us - very comforting.

WOW: Oh Anne - that's absolutely beautiful! I hope you're feeling better soon and back to writing. You have such a poetic nature and I enjoy reading your works. Thank you again for your time today and always and congratulations again my dear!

And until we meet again - may your paths be abundantly filled with enough lemons, sugar, and sunshine to make the most delicious lemonade you've ever tasted!

Hugs,
~Crystal

Today's post was penned by Crystal J. Casavant-Otto

Crystal Casavant writes. Everything. If you follow her blog you have likely laid eyes on every thought she has ever had. Her debut novel, It Was Never About Me, Was It? is still a work in progress and shall be fully worthy sometime in 2025. She has written for WOW! Women on Writing, Bring on Lemons, and has been featured in several magazines and ezines relating to credit and collections as well as religious collections for confessional Lutherans. She runs a busy household full of intelligent, recalcitrant, and delightful humans who give her breath and keep her heart beating day after day. 

Crystal wears many hats (and not just the one in this photo) and fully believes in being in the moment and doing everything she can to improve the lives of those around her! The world may never know her name, but she prays that because of her, someone may smile a little brighter. She prides herself on doing nice things - yes, even for strangers! 


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The Day After His Crucifixion - Interview with Merikay McLeod (and Join our Reader Review Event)

Wednesday, March 05, 2025
Today is the beginning of the Lenten season for the Christian community, the perfect time for Merikay McLeod's Christian historical fiction book The Day After His Crucifixion. Merkay shares her thoughts about the challenges of religious writing, tips for successful writing and more in today's interview.  If you are a Christian woman curious about Jesus and the women in his life, don't miss this book.

We're also inviting readers to participate in our Reader Review event. Sign up and receive a copy of the book! You don't need to be a blogger to join in on this event. Anyone who can leave a review on Goodreads and Amazon or Barnes & Noble can participate and receive a copy of The Day After His Crucifixion. By leaving a review, you'll also be entered in a drawing to win a $25 Amazon Gift Card!

About the Book

"Rich in biblical allusions and symbolism, ... the standout to me is McLeod's focus on the gathering of women to share memories of Jesus, a communal space for women where storytelling reinforces faith and offers comfort. Although the outcome is well-known, the journey to get there is both powerful and affecting, beautifully conveyed through McLeod's skillful writing."

-- Jamie Michele, Readers' Favorite Reviews


The Day After His Crucifixion weaves together the lives of the women who followed Yeshua the Nazarene when they gather the day after His crucifixion to comfort one another with personal, heart-felt stories of how the Promised One changed their lives forever.


Eavesdrop on their inspiring conversations and learn behind-the-scenes details of Yeshua's baptism, the Cana wedding feast, and other New Testament events, and discover afresh the power of His love.


ISBN-10: 1662955510

ISBN-13: 9781662955518

Publisher: Front Porch Publishing (April, 2025)

Length: 164 pages (paperback)


The Day After His Crucifixion is available in print at Amazon and Barnes & Noble. Take a moment to add it to your Goodreads list.


About the Author, Merikay McLeod


A Midwesterner by birth, Merikay McLeod spent most of her adulthood in northern California where she worked as a newspaper reporter, magazine editor, newspaper columnist and freelance writer. Her articles and stroies have won state and national awards, Her freelance work has appeared in such magazines as Good housekeeping, MS, Sunday digest, Insight, The chronicle of Higher Education and many others.


Her walk with Jesus is expressed most accurately by the 23rd Psalm. She has long pondered Jesus' respectful treatment of women despite the surrounding culture's view that women were inferior. The Day After His Crucifixion is her first fiction book. 


Interview by Jodi M. Webb


WOW:  Merikay, congratulations on your biblical novella The Day After His Crucifixion. What inspired you to write about the lives of the women who followed Jesus Christ?


Merikay: Two concepts inspired this book: The way Jesus treated women and the women themselves.


Jesus, known originally as Yeshua, was a first century Palestinian Jew. At that time and in that place, women's lives were greatly restricted. Their value was measured in the number of sons they birthed and the kind of household they ran. While it was very important for men to study scripture, women were not allowed to study sacred texts. There were all sorts of cultural and religious taboos concerning the interaction between men and women. For example, men could divorce their wives, but women could not divorce their husbands. And men were specifically prohibited from speaking to women in

public.


And here was Yeshua the Nazarene, something like a rock star with huge crowds following wherever he went, ignoring the taboos. He freely interacted with women, taught them, and welcomed them as his followers. In fact, women were the first to whom he told that he was the Messiah. And a woman was the first to see him after his resurrection.


Considering that patriarchal society, it is shocking that within the gospels there is no preaching on the status of women, yet there are several stories of Jesus' public encounters with women. In these encounters, he treats them with dignity, respect and compassion. He relates to them as equal human beings rather than sexual objects. He is interested in them as persons.


How must that have felt to the women who were used to being considered inferior or worse?


WOW: You are definitely coming at an ageless story from a new viewpoint. What led you there?


Merikay: I loved college and over time I earned graduate degrees in Women's Studies, Sociology, and Spirituality. All of those years of study kept me thinking about the women in Jesus' life and ministry. 


Later, well into my career, I realized that many of my colleagues knew little about Jesus or the world he lived in. They were curious but did not want to go to a church to find out more. After years of deep reflection and research, I wanted to write about Jesus and the women who encountered him. I wanted to introduce readers to the Jesus I had come to see in the gospels. But there have been so many books written about him, how could I say anything original?


I decided to introduce Jesus through the eyes of the women who encountered him. There would be no religious jargon in my book. I wouldn't even use the name "Jesus" but rather his birth name, the name everyone in his life knew him by -- Yeshua. Yeshua the Nazarene.


This book would not be a theological study. It would be a collection of stories. Women's stories. And where to start? Well, nothing draws friends and colleagues together to talk and remember, to laugh and cry, like the death of someone they love. So I started with Yeshua's crucifixion, and let the women take it from there.


WOW: What was the most challenging part of writing this book?


Merikay: Trying to imagine the authentic thoughts and feelings of each woman. Trying to get the story right, so that the reader would also share the feelings and thoughts, the memories, the life-altering experiences. Every time I read another book or study, more concepts about the culture or about women

in the culture flooded me. So, trying to keep the stories brief, the way we share stories with each other, was a struggle. I hope I was able to give each reader a genuine experience of the time and place and people involved.


WOW: At what point did you consider yourself a writer?


Merikay: When I was 14 or 15, I often spent my after school time at the city library. Kalamazoo City Library was a mile or so from our home. I'd walk there after school, and spend time searching the stacks for something interesting to read. Usually I searched the shelves in the young people's room, but one day, just out of curiosity, I wandered out into the grown ups area and began perusing the stacks, just looking at the various titles. 


On an upper shelf, a small, orange book caught my eye. Standing on tiptoe, I pulled it off the shelf. It was entitled: How to Write and Sell Fact and Fiction. I don't remember the author's name, but I remember the impact that title had on me. I suddenly realized that people got paid to write. That you can make money writing.


The world I lived in offered girls very little in the way of employment. You could clean houses and you could babysit. Baby sitting paid 35-cents an hour. A pittance, even in those days. And suddenly I realized I could earn money writing.


I loved to read and I'd often written little stories for myself. But now .... with my new found knowledge, I saw doors opening. I checked out the book, took it home, read it, and it changed my life.


One of the librarians introduced me to the magazine The Writer. It was in the adult periodical area of the library. It was full of articles about how to write for publication. And in the back were several pages describing what kind of stories and articles various magazines wanted.


I became an earnest and enthusiastic student. The book How to Write and Sell Fact and Fiction along with the magazine The Writer, became my teachers.


I began submitting poems and articles and stories. And it wasn't too long before I started receiving checks for my work. In the beginning I wrote little verses for religious magazines. I also wrote stories for children's Sunday School or Sabbath School magazines.


I learned that I could sell the same story to several different religious magazines, as long as the magazine's markets did not overlap. I could sell the same poem or story to a Catholic magazine and a Methodist magazine and a Baptist magazine and a Mennonite magazine and a Seventh-day Adventist magazine, and then the amount I earned per written piece was fairly significant.


You asked when I considered myself a writer. It was back then when I was a teenager, submitting my work to church publications and newspapers.


WOW: How did you writing grow from that young girl with a little book in the public library?


Merikay: As I grew older, it was my writing that opened employment doors. I worked in the PR department of the first college I attended. There I learned how to write press releases, and text for university brochures. A publishing house hired me to edit narratives. I freelanced for national and regional magazines writing on social justice issues and fascinating people. I became editor of a weekly newspaper. Then of a woman's business magazine, and eventually went to work in the communications department of Santa Clara University, and later the communications department in UC Berkeley. When I left the San Francisco Bay Area to live in the Gold Rush Mother Lode of California, I worked as a daily newspaper reporter. My work won state and national awards.


After retiring from paid employment, my husband and I began traveling the world and it was only natural to write about those journeys. We wrote six breezy travel memoirs under the byline of Al & Sunny Lockwood. Some were published independently, some by traditional publishers.


WOW: What do you find most rewarding about your work?


Merikay: Today I can look back on more than 50 years of writing and publishing. And all I can say

is that there are so many rewards to writing that I think it beats any other kind of work. Here are four rewards I can think of right off the top of my head:


1. The work itself is rewarding. The researching. Meeting outstanding individuals and interviewing them. Then, shaping a story that's never been told before. Or highlighting an idea that's never had the exact exposure you're giving it. Creating something that's never existed before is deeply satisfying.


2. Being paid for your work, receiving financial acknowledgement for something you alone created is most gratifying.


3. Seeing your work published in magazines, newspapers, journals or books is its own reward.


4. Receiving letters or emails from readers who love your work and want to let you know it, is another wonderful reward.


WOW: What do you do when you aren't writing?


Merikay: I'm almost always writing on something -- a manuscript, a story, etc. I'm also often researching markets that might welcome work from me. But when I'm not writing or thinking about writing, you can often find me watching a house remodel show on HGTV. Or swimming in the

community pool. Or traveling with my Sweetheart husband. We have traveled by car, train, plane and cruise ship. Have visited dozens of UNESCO World Heritage sites, as well as most of Western Europe, just about every state in the Union, much of South America, Canada's Maritimes, as well as Istanbul, Ephesus, and other fascinating places.


WOW: If you could give our readers one piece of writing advice, what would it be?


Merikay: If you enjoy writing, keep doing it. Don't get discouraged by rejections, learn from them.

Also, if you get bored with your work, try your hand at a different kind of writing. I've spent my career producing nonfiction. Now I'm trying something different. The Day After His Crucifixion is my first attempt at fiction. And I'm very excited about it.


WOW: As are we! And I think we should all take Merikay up on her challenge to try something different in our writing.


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Facing Self-Doubt Throughout the Writing Process

Tuesday, March 04, 2025
 

Every now and then, I run into a major sense of self-doubt about my own writing. It's as if a gong goes off in my head, and suddenly, I think: I have no idea what I'm doing. 

This experience came to mind recently when revising a story I've been working on for years. It's been a cumbersome little beast. I've plugged along, made progress, and hope to have a submittable version ready this year. And somewhere along the writing process recently, that thought came to my mind—that nagging self-doubt that says I have no idea what I'm doing.

I'm sure many of us feel that way about writing or other areas of our lives and careers. I've dealt with terrible anxiety about my freelance work lately. And often, the source of our doubt isn't a naysayer or a rejection letter. It's our own head.

Imagine if the doubt we express to ourselves about ourselves, we expressed to other people. Imagine going up to a writing friend and saying, "You're not much of a writer." Or "That isn't even realistic." Or "You think that's worthy of submission? Psh." They'd be offended. Likely, that friendship wouldn't last long.

I'm not saying that there aren't neg heads in the world that say these things. But why do join them? Why do we say these things to ourselves or allow those thoughts to linger? 

I wanted to share a trick if you are in that spiral of negative self-talk or self-doubt. I'm sure most of us have heard this advice one way or another throughout our lives. It's that wisdom shared by radio host Bernard Meltzer. He says, "Before you speak ask yourself if what you are going to say is true, is kind, is necessary, is helpful. If the answer is no, maybe what you are about to say should be left unsaid."

While the adage is applied to speaking to others, the same advice could be said of what we say to ourselves. In fact, you may even want to try writing out negative talk and reply to those questions: is it true? Is it kind? Is it necessary? Is it helpful? 

My biggest challenge this year is overcoming anxiety and self-doubt. It's been my beast of burden. Yet, I'm facing it head-on and not letting it stop me. I encourage you to do the same. While there are plenty of hurdles in achieving writing success, the last thing you want is to become the reason you don't continue with your goals or dreams. 

Nicole Pyles is a writer who has been published in Better Homes and Gardens, The Spruce, Tom's Guide, and other outlets. Her fiction has appeared in The Gold Man Review, Sky Island Journal, The Voices Project, Arlington Literary Journal, and more. Follow her blog at World of My Imagination.








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Interview with Bethany Jarmul, Runner Up in the WOW! Q1 2025 Essay Contest

Sunday, March 02, 2025
Bethany Jarmul is an Appalachian writer, poet, writing coach, and webinar instructor. She’s the author of two chapbooks, including a mini-memoir 
Take Me Home from Belle Point Press. Her debut poetry collection Lightning Is a Mother was released on February 7 from ELJ Editions. Her work has been published in many magazines including RattleBrevityHAD, and Salamander. Her writing was selected for Best Spiritual Literature 2023 and Best Small Fictions 2024, and has been nominated for the Pushcart Prize, The Best of the Net, Best Microfiction, and Wigleaf Top 50.  Several years ago, Bethany got her start in the literary world through taking classes offered by Women on Writing, so she’s very grateful for this organization and all that they offer. Connect with her at bethanyjarmul.com or on social media: @BethanyJarmul.

Interview by Jodi M. Webb

WOW: Congratulations on being a runner up in the Q1 2025 Creative Nonfiction Essay Contest for "When the Scheduler Calls and Refers to My Upcoming Procedure as an "Emergency Colonoscopy”. It was a very powerful "life flashing before my eyes" piece with a focus on family. Do you often write about family?

Bethany: Thank you! Yes, in fact, my mini-memoir (a chapbook of flash nonfiction essays) Take Me Home, is about family and roots and home. It's about coming to terms with growing up in West Virginia and what it means to belong somewhere even after you've left. 

WOW: You identify yourself as an "Appalachian writer". Can you share with us what that means to you and how it influences you as a writer?

Bethany: I now live near Pittsburgh, PA which is Appalachia, although certainly more urban. I was born and raised in West Virginia, the heart of rural Appalachia. My great grandpas were coal miners. My grandpas were a factory worker and a carpenter. I come from a line of hard-working, Bible-believing folks. The mountains themselves, the creeks and the critters, they all show up in my writing. As well as the destruction of nature, the mining and fracking and polluted drinking water. The sense of belonging somewhere, to a people, even after I’d left home. A deep spirituality and religiosity. The culture, a rich history of storytelling and folk music and pepperoni rolls and moonshine. The friendly and hard-working people. The unsafe working conditions and oppression that has often been experienced by the people living here. All these things influence who I am as a writer and what I engage with in my writing. 

WOW: What an image evoking description! You've been publishing and winning writing prizes for about four years now. When did you start writing? 

Bethany: I've been writing for as long as I can remember. However, there was a period of about five years in my early 20s when I didn't write. I returned to creative writing in 2021, as a new mother during the pandemic. In fact, I took a class through Women on Writing then, and that was near the beginning of my publishing journey. It was in 2021, when I first discovered literary magazines and began publishing my work. 

WOW: Your work takes many forms: essays, poetry, short fiction. Do you have a preference for any particular format?

Bethany: I write short things. Flash essays, flash fiction, and poetry. The large majority of my work is 1,000 words or less. What fascinates me most about writing is what language can do. I like to focus on each word, and writing in compressed word counts allows me to do that. Also, I'm a busy mom of two preschoolers, so it also fits my lifestyle. 

WOW: Aside from being a busy mom, what do you feel is your biggest challenge as a writer?

Bethany: My biggest challenge is balancing the creative mindset and the business mindset. Although being a successful writer means putting some time and effort into the business side of things, If I get too focused on or spend too much time on publications and promotions, it does impact my creativity and how I feel about my work. 

WOW: I think many of us struggle with that particular Catch-22. What is your next goal for your writing career?

Bethany: What's next for me? I'm going to continue to pursue excellence in the craft of writing and help others do the same. I have another poetry manuscript completed, so I hope to find a publisher for that. And in the meantime, just write my heart out. That's pretty much always the plan. 

WOW: That sounds like the ideal plan, considering just how much you've accomplished in your brief writing career. We look forward to reading more!
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