Showing posts with label novel writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label novel writing. Show all posts

Friday Speak Out!: Characters without Characteristics

Friday, July 10, 2026
By Fran Hawthorne

From the first draft of my most recent novel, Her Daughter, I knew that I needed to strip its characters of almost any identifiable trace of religion, ethnic background, nationality, or race.

That's because the story centers on a type of domestic abuse called Parental Alienation, where one parent deliberately gaslights the children to turn them against the other parent. I didn't want readers to think they could wave off the gaslighting parent's horrible behavior as something that only "they" (insert ethnic bias) do, that "our kind of people" would never do.

As writers, we work hard to give our characters vivid quirks, habits, speech patterns, and hairstyles. I didn't realize how difficult it would be to take some of that away--how much even the smallest ethnic clues are woven into our everyday lives.

For starters, my characters have white-bread names, such as Alice Wilson and Robert Corning, which could come from Northern European heritage or could have been changed on Ellis Island. The only holidays they celebrate are secular ones like Halloween and Mother's Day. The daughter of the title eats Cheerios as a baby and organic strawberries and wheat germ as a picky teen, but never bagels, churros, or pho.

No chapter takes place during December, because in the contemporary U.S., a family at that time of year would probably be brainstorming gift ideas for ... uh, which December festival?

Almost the only clues I allowed were occasional bits of description--"sun-blonde ponytail," "wild brown hair," "dark blue eyes"--because I think readers deserve some visual landmarks.

For a while, my self-imposed limits were an intellectual challenge, but not too onerous--akin to avoiding crutch words like "just" and "often." Until the funeral scene.

That scene is an important turning point in the narrative. However, commemorations of death are also key elements of cultures and religions. How soon after death is a person buried? How, when, and where would family and friends gather to remember the deceased?

If they gather at the funeral home before the burial--that's a Catholic wake. If they gather at the person's home after the burial--that's a Jewish shiva.

Couldn't I bury the dead in peace?

Oh, I wished I could simply write about the contemporary, secular-Jewish families that peopled my first two novels and that I'm comfortable with! How easily an "oy" would type itself into a round of dialogue, a bagel onto a breakfast platter.

And you know what? It's a good thing I couldn't.

Sure, fictional characters need the richness of ethnic food, names, music, and holidays, but they also need to have an unexpected mix of qualities--the same as real people do. Writing this book stretched me to think of new ways of describing my characters, without the easy cultural tags. I think they're better people because of it.

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photo credit Jolene Siana
During her award-winning journalism career, FRAN HAWTHORNE wrote eight nonfiction books, mainly about consumer activism, the drug industry, and the financial world. She's also been an editor or regular contributor for Business Week, The New York Times, and many other publications. Her first two novels, The Heirs and I Meant to Tell You, were published in 2018 and 2022 by Stephen F. Austin State University Press and together won or were named a finalist for seven awards, including the Eric Hoffer Book Awards and the Sarton Award. HER DAUGHTER, Fran's third novel, was published in January 2026 by Black Rose Writing. She's at work on Number 4 from her home in Brooklyn, NY. Learn more at https://www.hawthornewriter.com/

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Friday Speak Out!: WHAT NEWSPAPERS TAUGHT ME ABOUT WRITING FICTION

Friday, January 09, 2026
By Fran Hawthorne

Who? What? When? Where? Why?

For 30 years, that list was drummed into me and my colleagues by the editors at the newspapers and magazines where we worked: Give your readers the facts. Provable facts. No highfalutin' language. No opinions. The facts will tell the story.

A few factual adjectives were permitted. A city council meeting might be crowded, loud, even "spirited." A criminal suspect--especially, of course, one who was still at large--could be described as short, tall, heavyset (never "fat"), blond, elderly. Our ultimate workaround was to sneak in a direct quote from someone who used an adjective or two.

In any case, with our stories usually confined to strict wordcount limits, we had no room for adjectives. As for adverbs? They barely existed.

In a meeting that ran past midnight, and after two years of debate, the City Council yesterday voted 8 to 7 to allow low-income housing on a former warehouse site on the east side.

That's almost flash fiction, isn't it?

Now, however--ah, now I write novels. Now I can actually play with words like: scared, uncertain, miserable, eagerly, carefully.

But here's the thing: I rarely do.

If journalists are taught the five Ws, fiction-writers are just as powerfully imbued with the demand to "show, don't tell."

I don't want to outright tell my readers that Alice, in my new novel HER DAUGHTER, is nervous about meeting with her daughter and her ex-husband. I want readers to feel her nervousness, through the way that she prepares a detailed list of things to say and arrives early at their designated Starbucks in order to scout out tables. She wishes she'd ordered a muffin so that she could keep her fingers busy picking it apart. She knocks over her coffee cup. Maybe I'll even have her best friend urge her beforehand not to be nervous.

After all these years, I've grown into my hybrid style. Call it journafiction? I don't want a lot of fussy little descriptive tics.

Still, I'm glad to have a few stunning or exhilarating (but not tired) adjectives and adverbs in my palette, to be used occasionally and judiciously (but not extravagantly).

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During her award-winning journalism career, FRAN HAWTHORNE wrote eight nonfiction books, mainly about consumer activism, the drug industry, and the financial world. She’s also been an editor or regular contributor for Business Week, The New York Times, and many other publications. Her first two novels, The Heirs and I Meant to Tell You, were published in 2018 and 2022 by Stephen F. Austin State University Press and together won or were named a finalist for seven awards, including the Eric Hoffer Book Awards and the Sarton Award. HER DAUGHTER, Fran’s third novel, will be published in January 2026 by Black Rose Writing. She’s at work on Number 4 from her home in Brooklyn, NY. Learn more at hawthornewriter.com

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Friday Speak Out!: When an Historian Writes Historical Fiction

Friday, December 12, 2025
By Nancy Bernhard

What’s the difference between writing history and writing historical fiction? As an historian turned novelist, I bring the same love of research and discovery to each project. I respect facts and timelines in my fiction, but when evidence ends, imagination steps in and I invent freely.

My novel The Double Standard Sporting House is set in an elite brothel in 1868 New York. At that time there were more than 500 brothels in the city, from dirt cheap and risky to wildly expensive and elegant, but we have very little evidence about the women working in any of them. The few contemporary studies reek of moral hypocrisy and the sexual double standard.

The women of premium brothels had intimate access to the most powerful men in the city, members of the corrupt Tammany Hall political machine at the height of its power. I chose this setting because I wanted to set the power of intimacy, compassion, and community against that based in competition, violence, and exploitation. My heroine is a healer who runs the brothel to fund her clinic for women, and to practice medicine as she sees fit.

My first question when researching 19th century prostitutes was: who were they? Many thousands scraping by as housemaids or needleworkers did it to supplement meager wages. 30% of women at that time did occasional sex work just to get by! In contrast, 1-2% of women do sex work today when we have access to many more kinds of employment.

Educated or middle-class girls most often found themselves in prostitution because they were seduced and abandoned, or raped. Cast out or ashamed, unable to return to their families or homes, it was often their only option, and it could be very lucrative. Apart from going on stage or trading stocks, owning a brothel was the only way for a single woman to gain property or earn a fortune.

I chose 1868 because of one half-line in historian Marilyn Wood Hill’s book Their Sisters’ Keepers: Prostitution in New York City, 1830-1870, describing “a brief but unique era when prostitution was managed predominantly by females.” That era ended when the Tammany Hall political machine gained control of the sex trade through trafficking and exploitation, which seeded my plot and antagonists.

I searched for evidence of these female entrepreneurs, but deep sources always came from the wrong place or time. Abbott Kahler’s delightful Sin in the Second City about a Chicago brothel in the early 20th century inspired some fun details. I thought I’d found a fascinating memoir by a madam called Nell Kimball who ran a house in 19th century St. Louis, but it turned out to be a fabrication—a complete fraud—by prolific author Stephen Longstreet.

Having read about 100 books on 19th century prostitution, women’s health, and Tammany Hall, I told as layered and authentic a story as I was able. You might say such thorough research only provides the backdrop to story and character, which do indeed come first in a novel. But a story and characters often resonate because they’re rooted in good history.

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Nancy Bernhard is a journalism historian and yoga teacher, fascinated by how survivors of sexual and political violence heal through storytelling and movement. Having earned a BA in religion at Dartmouth, a PhD in American History at the University of Pennsylvania, and taught at Harvard, Bernhard turned her indignation over the sexual double standard into an absorbing tale rooted in the 19th century history of Tammany Hall. She was born in Brooklyn, and lives with her family in Somerville, Massachusetts.

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Friday Speak Out!: Wouldst Thou Read Medieval Dialogue?

Friday, February 14, 2025
by Terri Lewis

Ten years ago I was struggling to finish a novel when by chance I encountered the story of Isabelle d’Angoulême, and in short order, she completely swamped my imagination. Using a few meager facts—when quite young, she’d been stolen from her fiancé by King John of England who married her and whisked her away to England—I’d daydream scenes, certain a great novel was hidden in her life.

I should mention that thanks to a brilliant college professor, I’d long loved medieval history. We’d read original texts such as writs of charter, excommunications, or guild laws, and discussed what those texts meant to the people they touched. I became fascinated by the dynasties, marriages, clothes, and illuminations; the Cloisters museum in New York City and Musee d’Orsay in Paris were favorites; and when I traveled, I sought out cathedrals, stained glass, and castles. I felt prepared to bring a woman in the early 13th century to life.

And that was the point. My Isabelle would step off the page as a woman who gained power in difficult times; she’d entrance the reader as she had me. Although unpublished, I had been working on my craft for over ten years. I knew how to create a plot, tension, and a believable character who transformed through experience.

So I abandoned the other novel and began. Soon I had Isabelle, John, and Hugh, the fiancé, riding through great forests, walking and dancing in stone rooms heated by fire. But then I ran into a difficulty. How did they talk? For a relatable story, Isabelle and John’s dialog needed a sense of difference, but mustn’t sound stilted. The minute they said prithee or doth, their reality would disappear and the story would cease to resonate for a modern reader.

Dialog has many functions. It should forward the plot, but also establish tone and reveal character. Word choice is key. When I remember my grandfather saying, “How’s that now?” his rough whiskers and sly humor comes into focus. My sister’s pet phrase “They’ll figure it out,” evokes the time when her kids were teens. What were medieval equivalents? I wanted to evoke real people living in a completely foreign era.

Research told me Isabelle and John likely spoke a mixture of Latin, Middle English, and some variant of French, so I inserted bits of modern French and touches of Latin but avoided archaic language such as alas or thy/thee/thine. Eventually I did allow an occasional oddity such as “Walk on, 'tis cold,” or “I leave on the morrow.”

I also renounced contractions when the characters spoke. Cannot and is not would give a tinge of distance. But I retained contractions in general text so the narrative could flow naturally to the modern ear.

Because Isabelle lived in a time of war when swearing would seem natural, I searched for pertinent swear words. Some were hilarious. I chose maléfice, a pox on you, and God’s bones, plus descriptions such as dankish gudgeon and useless shite. Because Isabelle was eleven in the novel’s first chapter, the more demure Pismire, meaning ant, but derived from the Latin for piss, seemed appropriate.

Most of my characters were high-born, but for the occasional peasant or guard, I used slight grammatical errors—“I now alone, without my husband” or “Most like I’ll never go”—dismaying my proofreader.

And finally, as I edited at the sentence level, I researched alternate verbs on Merriam-Webster’s Word History, choosing words that were in use at the time or that had stemmed from Latin, Middle English, or old French. The word might be perfectly modern but still have an unusual feel. Hugh’s first appearance in the story has some examples: He wanted to be deemed (considered) worthy of being a squire—his life’s goal at sixteen—and fight to uphold (defend) his family’s honor, but instead he’d been sent to Angoulême to ferret out (find out) if an attack was imminent.

I’ll note that this editing is anal and time-consuming, but like all writers, I wanted my debut novel to be the best I could make it.

My hope is that with these slight adjustments readers will sense some otherness in the language, but find the story of a woman who locates and claims her own power in the face of men’s disdain and contempt completely modern.

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Terri Lewis fell in love with medieval history in college. Not the dates or wars, but the mysterious daily lives of the people. Building on this love, she read widely and traveled, marveling at Europe’s preserved towns and castles. Finally, a sentence in a book bought at Windsor Castle led her to write Behold the Bird in Flight.

Her writing has been honed through workshops with Jill McCorkle, Laura Van Den Berg, and Rebecca Makkai and she has published in literary magazines. She lives with her husband and two lively dogs in Denver, Colorado.

You can check out her novel here: https://www.simonandschuster.com/books/Behold-the-Bird-in-Flight/Terri-Lewis/9781647429102

Or read about her life in writing and ballet here: https://terrilewis1.com

Or signup for her newsletter here: https://terrilewis1.substack.com/

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American Still Life by Jim Naremore: Blog Tour & Giveaway

Monday, January 06, 2025

American Still Life by Jim Naremore


Do you have any book related resolutions for 2025? Why not start with delving into the work of an author you've never read before? I might have just the author for you! We're launching a blog tour for American Still Life by Jim Naremore. Fans of Sharp Objects by Gillian Flynn and Queen’s Gambit by Walter Tevis will find an intriguing read in this journey of loss and redemption. Join us as we celebrate the launch of his book with a giveaway and an interview with the author.
 
But before we get to that, here's more about his book:
 
We are all drowning, and we are all saviors.
 
Wresting with addiction, guilt, and self-loathing, gifted photojournalist Skade Felsdottir finds herself trapped in a web of her own creation when she is forced by circumstances to return to her hometown—the place that holds her crippling secrets. After screwing up her “big break,” a photo essay book about descansos—roadside memorials to people who have died tragically, Skade tries to salvage the project against a tight deadline. While simultaneously working and keeping her darkest demons at bay, Skade reconnects with an old boyfriend and befriends a unique but broken young woman named Kit. Their burgeoning friendship begins a process of healing for them both, until a devastating sequence of events plunges Skade into darkness, leaving her to decide between redemption and running away; between life and death. Set against a backdrop of the back roads of a forgotten America, American Still Life explores the crossroads of grief and artistic expression, of loneliness and atonement. A journey familiar.
 
Publisher: Regal House Publishing (December 17, 2024)
ISBN: 1646035054
ISBN: 978-1646035052
AISN:  B0CNTWJH98
Print length:  296 pages

Purchase your copy on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Bookshop.org. You'll also want to add it to your GoodReads reading list.

About the Author, Jim Naremore

With roots in the American deep south and the Midwest grounding his sense of place, Jim Naremore has published an array of short fiction and the award-winning novel The Arts of Legerdemain as Taught by Ghosts (Belle Lutte, 2016). He holds an MFA from the Solstice program at Lasell University in Boston and currently lives with his partner and cat in New York’s Hudson River Valley.

Instagram: @jim_naremore

--Interview by Jodi M. Webb

WOW: Welcome, Jim. We're all looking forward to the first blog tour for 2025 with your literary fiction American Still Life.

Jim: I’m so happy to be working with WOW on the launch of this novel. Thanks so much to the WOW team and to all your dedicated book-bloggers who really help push independent literature!

WOW: Yes, we love discovering indie books that might not have the promotional push of books with the Big Five. So tell us how you first learned about Descansos, and what made you want to include them in a book?

Jim: Just as Skade says in her book notes in American Still Life (ASL), I think I’ve been aware of
descansos as objects for as long as I’ve been riding in cars. I remember being fascinated by them when I saw them as a kid. They are one of the last real deeply-felt examples of pure folk art that most of us get to experience either as observers or as creators. That fascination was what led to the writing of ASL, and it kind of shows off my creative process. 

I’m always finding little ideas: lines of dialog, metaphors, images, plot ideas, character ideas, settings, etc. I jot all these down in notebooks. When I get ready to start a new book, essentially, I put a bunch of these little concepts in a bag, shake them up, and see what comes out. ASL started with the idea of someone doing a photo-essay on descansos. I guess I always thought that would be an interesting thing to do. Descansos are so uniquely visual, and they vary so much (I’ve seen some spectacular ones in the desert in southern California) that I think they lend themselves perfectly to that idea. 

Some of the other ideas that went into that bag included a plot idea about a group (not just one) of puppeteers and how they related to their puppets, the concepts of memorial tattoos, a character who was a very tall and awkward and traumatized young woman looking for a friend (“Kit is short for Kitten, my dad was an asshole” was probably the first line I actually wrote for the book), and Skade, who was in a short story I could never get quite right (I think I wanted it to be a short story and it wanted to be a novel… we’re still discussing it). Eventually, ASL grew out of all that. 

The novel I began to write was quite a bit different than the one that emerged, but that’s the writing process for a novel, I think. I think another answer to that question is that I am very, very interested in folklore and fairytales. I probably should have majored in folklore studies in college, but I didn’t think of it. As I said, descansos are unique performative pieces of folklore. Folklore and fairytales are parts of all my writing.
 
"Finishing a book is really hard. As such, we create ways to keep us from having to actually finish. And that research thing is one of those strategies… You just need to know enough to sound like you know what you’re talking about. No, that’s not lying or cheating. You’ve done enough research when you can effectively answer all the questions the book gives you."

WOW: Do you do research, or work with things you already know? When do you know when you’ve done enough research?

Jim: I do a fair amount of research. To me, it’s a big part of the fun of writing books, and the research can REALLY help in creating and advancing the plot! Of course, I usually start with things I’m already interested in and so I do know a little bit about the things I write about before I go in. For my first book, The Arts of Legerdemain as Taught by Ghosts (TAoLaTbG), I did a lot of research on stage magic and spiritualism, even though I already had a decent working knowledge of both, I suppose. 

For ASL, I dove into descansos, puppets and puppetry, and tattoos and tattooing. I learned a good amount and found some great books and resources. I also spent time in and around real descansos when I got the chance. They can be quite powerful to sit with. 

That question about when you’ve done enough research is a killer. In a vacuum, the answer is never, and that can be absolutely paralyzing. I’ve taught workshops on writing novels, and something we talk about are roadblocks. Finishing a book is really hard. As such, we create ways to keep us from having to actually finish (write “The End.” I won’t go into why that is now, it’s an essay in itself). And that research thing is one of those strategies… “I don’t know enough yet, I need to do more reading! It’s not perfect!” 

The best example of this is writing mysteries (I’m working on a mystery now, actually). If you’re doing a mystery, chances are (unless you have rare personal experience) you have no idea beyond what you’ve seen on TV or what you’ve read in books about how the police actually work or how a detective actually solves crimes. The desire to not look like an idiot by writing something that a reader could poke a hole in is really strong, so it’s really easy to get lost in never-ending research into police procedure and the wonkiness of being a private detective. But here’s the thing: the vast majority of your readers don’t really know much more than you do. Yes, the more you know, the better you can create, but you are not (should not) go into crazy amounts of procedural detail in your writing. You just need to know enough to sound like you know what you’re talking about. No, that’s not lying or cheating. You’ve done enough research when you can effectively answer all the questions the book gives you. There will ALWAYS be more to know, but you don’t have to know it for the purposes of story.

WOW: What appeals to you about the themes of what people leave behind and reinventing yourself?

Jim: It’s funny, with both TAoLaTbG (That’s a hell of a title. Not going to do a long one like that again, I don’t expect!) and ASL, and the stuff I’m working on now, I feel like I keep writing the same story over and over again. I’m just beginning to explore that. Obviously, there are psychological reasons for it in my life. My books are full of people I “know” or recognize. It’s a lot easier to write people you are familiar with at some level. So, I think these themes are part of the lives of a lot of people I was close to. Beyond that, I think I’m also trying to write about myself to a degree.

While I was shopping Legerdemain to agents, I got some real interest from one agent in particular who ultimately decided not to pick it up, but who did make a key suggestion: that I put more of me on the page. Steve Kozwa from Legerdemain is like me, but he’s not me. Skade Felsdottir is a LOT more me. Skade and her journey are really much more of my own. I was in active addiction for a very long time. I think the best definition of sobriety has very little to do with abstinence (really important, don’t get me wrong!), and more to do with establishing or re-establishing a relationship with your true self. 

This notion of reinventing yourself is really closer to the theme of finding your true self. Rather than creating something new, it’s more coming home to yourself. I think that’s the big umbrella theme I keep writing: Figuring out who you are and coming home to it from a thing you are not.

WOW: Have you ever reinvented yourself?

Jim: As above, yes, very much in a general context. I got sober. I started trying to get comfortable with myself and who I was and my own place in things. That’s a massive reinvention, even if its more letting go of a lot of things I was not or things that were not serving my essential self anymore. A very long hard road. Rather than “reinvention” I might say “rediscovery.”
 
 
"You don’t need to use much craft or technical skill in the first draft, you shouldn’t, because it slows you down and gets in the way. But the rewrites are where you actually get to be a 'writer,' where your skill and technique come to play."
 

WOW: Did you learn things from the first book that helped you write the second?

Jim: For sure. A big thing was that I could do it, and not just do it, but do a fairly okay job of it. That’s huge. In terms of practical process, I’m still learning. I have a way of organizing and creating the story that works for me, even though it’s tough to explain and very inefficient, probably. 

One thing I did come to understand, there are two very, very different stages in writing long fiction: the first draft and the rewrites. The first draft is all about creativity, it’s just organically getting the ideas and words out onto the page. Its very free and explosive and artistic. There are very few rules associated with it, and it requires a certain mindset or part of yourself to do it. 

The rewrites, on the other hand, are where the actual writing begins. You don’t need to use much craft or technical skill in the first draft, you shouldn’t, because it slows you down and gets in the way. But the rewrites are where you actually get to be a “writer,” where your skill and technique come to play. I really enjoy the rewrite part. The creative first draft is hard for me. But both are absolutely vital to the creating of a good novel.

WOW: One piece of advice for a budding novelist?

Jim: I’m going to cheat and give two masquerading as one. Get tied into narrative artforms. Read, read, read. Watch movies and TV shows. Listen to narrative music forms. Go to plays. Try to pay attention not just to the stories, but how they are being told. Look for the patterns in both the “what” and also the “how.” Then do one for yourself… AND FINISH IT. Don’t worry about how good it is. Finish it.  Don’t give up. If you give up and stop before you finish you are training yourself to not complete something. If you finish something, even if it’s not any good, you are training yourself to complete something. 

A third one: keep a notebook with you at all times. Write down any little thought or idea, no matter how disconnected or odd or unimportant it is, even if it’s just a word you discover that you like (I wrote down the word “skein” in my notebook. I love the way that word sounds, how it feels to say, ad the metaphorical meanings in it).
 
 
"Don’t worry about how good it is. Finish it. Don’t give up. If you give up and stop before you finish you are training yourself to not complete something."


WOW: What are you working on now?

Jim: Long answer: I’ve got three things I’m toying with and a fourth idea. I love mysteries and always swore I’d try one, so I’m playing with a mystery novel. I read a lot of Raymond Chandler and other American noir detective fiction growing up, and I think my voice lends well to that form, so I’ve got a start, but I also discovered that the novel I was writing was not working the way I wanted it to, so I sat it aside and thought about it for a while, got some distance from it, and now I think I’ve got a better start for it. 

Then I’ve got two novel ideas that are the lit-fc I normally write, one is based on a short story I wrote several years ago that I think would work nicely in a longer form about a broken-down carnival-circuit professional wrestler who finds himself stuck with a cat named Spike after the young woman who owned Spike took off with the wrestler’s money. The other idea is a much more complicated story of interwoven plotlines but its essentially a pair of parallel love stories, romances, laid over themes of family trauma. I recently discovered that those last two ideas were trying to get at the same story, actually—notions of self and self-esteem and why and how we love—so I needed to pick one and set the other aside. I sat the wrestler aside for now and began concentrating on the other story.

My first drafts are almost comically over-done and packed with too many ideas and this one is no different. I’ve got two love stories, both with enormous problems (one is unrequited the other involves a character who is engaged to another person) an autistic character, a character with a terribly disfiguring congenital condition, a character having strange premonitions of the future, a long sad fairytale, a camel, Camille Longday is in this one, too (she is in all my novels. Don’t know why), a lawyer named Porkchop, a haunted grocery store, a character with a terribly dysfunctional relationship to his extended family, a dying grandmother, and department store mannequins. I’m hoping it is both sad and funny. We shall see. 

I’m researching historical barn building, American stonewall construction, scarecrows, the history of carnival sideshows, and a few other things. It’s a lot. We will see what actually makes it into the story.

WOW: Thanks for giving us a peek inside a writer's mind. I think we can all identify that "I've got all these ideas but have no idea if they'll all fit together" feeling.
 
American Still Life by Jim Naremore Blog Tour

-- Blog Tour Calendar

January 6th @ The Muffin
Join us as we celebrate the launch of Jim Naremore's literary fiction American Still Life. Read an interview with the author and enter to win a copy of his book.

January 7th @ C.C. King
Author Jim Naremore stops by with a guest post about how you transform an idea into a full blown story.

January 9th @ Some Thoughts - Everything Creativity
Jim Naremore, author of American Still Life, share his thoughts on the MFA: what do those three letters get you?

January 10th @ What Is That Book About
The spotlight's on American Still Life by Jim Naremore. Could this be your weekend read?

January 12th @ Knotty Needle
Judy reviews American Still Life by Jim Naremore.

January 13th @ Tracey Lampley
Author Jim Naremore wants to talk about sex...and the challenge of writing a good sex scene.

January 14th @ A Storybook World
Want a cup of tea and a good read on this winter day? Check out the spotlight on Jim Naremore's American Still Life.

January 14th @ Tracey Lampley
Author Jim Naremore is back with Part 2 of the challenge of writing a good sex scene.

January 15th @ Choices
Jim Naremore stops by with the ABCs of a good writers' group.

January 16th @ Words by Webb
Thoughts on the novel American Still Life.

January 18th @ Boots, Shoes and Fashion
Meet writer Jim Naremore in today's interview.

January 21st @ Word Magic
Before you “kill your darlings”, what does that misunderstood axiom really mean? Author Jim Naremore shares his thoughts on darlings and their demise!

January 23rd @ Lisa Haselton Book Reviews and Interviews
Lisa has some intriguing questions for Jim Naremore in today's author interview.

January 24th @ A Wonderful World of Words
What's the first thing Jim Naremore tells students in his Novel Class? Stop by and find out! 

January 29th @ The Faerie Review
Discover author Jim Naremore with a review of his latest: American Still Life.

January 31st @ Nikki's Book and Movie Reviews
Looking for a new book for next month? Check out Nikki's review of American Still Life. 

February 4th @ Writer Advice
Stop by for some tips from Jim Naremore on ways to find and maintain (and recover!) your “voice” in writing.

February 7th @ Boys' Mom Reads!
American Still Life is reviewed by Karen of Boys' Mom reads!

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Friday Speak Out!: Seeds of Truth in Fiction

Friday, March 29, 2024
By Mary Fleming

People often ask me: “Where do you get your ideas?”

They generally express this question with wonderment, as if I must have lived a wildly adventurous life. Or as if they see me sitting down at my desk, picking up a pen or opening the computer and Bang, the plot and the characters strike like a bolt from heaven and out flows a novel.

If only.

I collect the seeds for my fiction from real life. Either things my friends have experienced or a story I read in the news. When the story sticks with me, it starts to take root in my brain, and I know I have a possible short story or novel. Then plot and characters begin to grow and take shape. By the end the seed has developed into something quite different from the origin story.

My first novel, Someone Else, for example, is the story of an American woman with the perfect Paris life: a literary editor married to a French architect with four children. But as a university student, she’d run away from a crime of arson and left the perpetrator to take all the blame. When he comes to Paris, the perfect life unravels. The idea came from Katherine Ann Power, a 60’s radical who escaped arrest as an accomplice to a fatal bank robbery in 1970. She changed her name and built a perfect Oregon life as a wife, mother and cook. After 23 years of secrecy and lies, she turned herself in.

In my story there were no deaths, no going underground, no new identities and the truth came out against the character’s will. It was the idea of being haunted by past deeds and secrets that appealed to me.

The seed for my second novel, The Art of Regret, came from a friend’s childhood trauma. Her father committed suicide when she was 15. Afterwards, it was never discussed with her mother or sister. That unspoken but defining experience had made her an edgy young person, like my main character (a man). Redemption is achieved by both the real and the fictional person through love, connecting intensely with another human being.

The idea for Civilisation Française came from reading about an empty old mansion on the place des Vosges that was being squatted in 2009-10. I moved the story to the early 1980s, when I first arrived in Paris, and plopped my two main characters plus a housekeeper into a few of its rooms and took the story from there.

In all three cases, the real-life stories took root in my creative mind because they illustrated themes that are important to me: how the past overshadows the present, what is the definition of home, the difficulties of connecting with other people.

If you want to know what to write about, you don’t need to look very far. Just listen to friends or open a newspaper.

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Mary Fleming’s new novel, CIVILISATION FRANÇAISE , comes out from Heliotrope Books in July. She was born in Chicago and has lived in France for many years. After working as a journalist and consultant, she turned to fiction and has written two other novels, Someone Else and The Art of Regret. Her bi-weekly photo-essay, A Paris-Perche Diary, tracks city and country (Normandy) life. Find her online at website: Mary Fleming Author, blog: A Paris Perche Diary, and Instagram: @flemingm6

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Friday Speak Out!: Writing Diverse Characters

Friday, October 20, 2023
by Karen Klink

As a white female who grew up outside Akron, Ohio, I found that writing a 19th century historical novel featuring a bisexual young man and a young black slave who he considered his brother to be a fascinating and sometimes risky journey. I wanted to explore the multifaceted aspects of writing diverse characters, the significance of historical accuracy, and the delicate balance between representation and sensitivity.

To lay a sturdy foundation, I first delved into literature written by and about gay and black men, like Alan Hollinghurst, Jonathan Ned Katz, Malcolm X, Robert Jones, Jr., and Colson Whitehead. This helped me to understand the experiences, perspectives, and challenges faced by the characters I wished to portray.

Attending webinars and classes on diversity further enriched my knowledge of diversity. I highly recommend these classes for anyone who wishes to write about diverse characters. Writing groups, such as Authors Guild, offer these and other webinars to their members.

Lastly, I hired sensitivity readers for my novel as a vital step in ensuring that my characters were authentic and respectful representations of the communities to which they belong.

Historical Accuracy vs. Modern Sensibilities

One of the central dilemmas in writing diverse characters set in a historical context is the tension between historical accuracy and modern sensibilities. It’s crucial to portray the attitudes and norms of the time accurately, even if they may be uncomfortable or offensive to contemporary readers. This authenticity allows readers to understand the complexities of the past and how far society has come to the present day.

However, balancing historical accuracy with sensitivity requires subtly. It’s essential to approach sensitive topics with care, ensuring that they are neither sensationalized nor glossed over. By delving into the emotional and psychological depth of characters, I hoped to create a nuanced portrayal that resonates with readers while respecting historical context.

Diversity and Empathy

Writing diverse characters requires empathy. Putting myself in my characters’ shoes, regardless of their backgrounds, helped authentically capture their experiences, emotions, and growth. Empathy bridged the gap between me and my characters, allowing their stories to unfold with authenticity.

Finally, it’s important to acknowledge that narratives surrounding diverse characters have evolved over time. My novel, set in the 19th century, captures a particular moment in history. Contemporary authors may approach similar themes differently, reflecting the progress and changing perspectives of society. As an author, I have the freedom to choose the historical context that best serves my narrative while respecting the past.

The journey I embarked upon through research, education, and collaboration with sensitivity readers underscores my commitment to honest storytelling. By striking a balance between historical accuracy and sensitivity, I allow readers to engage with my characters in a way that both enlightens and entertains. I hope that all my work exemplifies the power of literature to illuminate the diverse tapestry of human experiences across time.

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Karen Anne Klink is a writer based in Tucson. Her debut novel, At What Cost, Silence? (She Writes Press, 10/17/23) is the first installment in her Texian trilogy.
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Friday Speak Out!: Four Reasons to Use Multiple Points of View in Your Novel

Friday, June 02, 2023
Writers often struggle with whether to tell a story through the lens of one or many characters. Multiple point of view (POV) can be tricky to master, but there are several reasons it can be very effective. Rather than go with your gut, consider if your intentions align with these considerations when making a choice.

First, a multiple POV approach can result in a rich characterization, because readers experience characters from both inside and out – at times from their thoughts and feelings and at times when other characters reflect on them. If you have an unreliable, complicated, or defensive narrator, you might benefit from this approach. A great example of such in-depth characterization is Mrs. Dalloway by Virginia Woolf. By having Mrs. Dalloway’s interiority interlaced with others’ view of her, we get a more nuanced and multifaceted sense of her personality.

Second, because point of view refers to the consciousness through which we see and understand the events of a story, a multiple POV approach can offer the reader competing interpretations. In Atonement, by Ian McEwan, the shifting POV gives varying perspectives on the events of a single day that changes the lives of the characters forever, in a kind of collective understanding.

Perhaps your aim is to reveal different facets of a given world, the way Tom Wolfe skewers social class and politics in 1980s’ New York City in Bonfire of the Vanities. Varied walks of life and a chorus of voices can create a kind of kaleidoscope effect and capture a society as a whole. In my forthcoming novel, THE STARK BEAUTY OF LAST THINGS, I wanted to tell the story of the coastal area of Montauk, Long Island, an elegy of sorts, and the characters profoundly in love with that place. I wanted to suck in everything–the world of fishing, of landscape painting, land use, and every aspect of nature. Each of my point of view characters contributes a different kind of knowledge to create what I hope is a larger whole.

Multiple POV is especially successful in combating a lecturing tone in fiction that deal with controversial themes and issues. As different characters espouse different values or sides of an issue, the reader engages with these debates as well. In Her Sister’s Tattoo, by Ellen Meeropol, a conflict between two sisters and their warring views animates the story and challenges to reader to choose sides as well. In my novel each character has a slightly different relationship to the land, whether it represents beauty, spiritualty, heritage, or a resource to be bought and sold. Multiple points of view allowed me to explore various themes through the thoughts and opinions of a variety of characters and come at issues from contrasting angles.

It can be a challenge to manage the plot and timeline in a multiple POV novel, but it’s worth the effort if your aims and material align with any of these four reasons.

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Céline Keating is an award-winning writer living in Bristol, Rhode Island. She is the author of two novels: Layla (2011), a Huffington Post featured title, and Play for Me (2015), a finalist in the International Book Awards, the Indie Excellence Awards, and the USA Book Awards. Her short fiction and articles have been published in many literary journals and magazines. For many years a resident of Montauk, NY, Céline continues to serve on the board of environmental 
organization Concerned Citizens

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Friday Speak Out!: How Janet Evanovich’s Book Helped Me Try Writing in a New Genre

Friday, October 28, 2022
By Dawn Colclasure

Self-publishing is not new for me. I have self-published poetry books and children’s books since 2012. My experience with self-publishing took an interesting turn this year, when I self-pubbed horror!

An independent publisher who showed interest in publishing my collection of YA horror stories ended up turning it down. “Too dark,” they said.

However, one issue about these stories stood out: The teen characters committing murder. My publisher was worried the stories would have too much influence over teen readers, encouraging them to seek bloodthirsty revenge on bullies and abusers. It was such a pressing issue that they wouldn’t be so worried about my releasing these stories into the world should I do something a little bit different with the book: Offer a teaser for a novel I haven’t yet written at the end!

They shared with me their idea. Why not write a series about an amateur sleuth who attempts to help these girls who have committed their crimes? After all, they would eventually end up getting caught, wouldn’t they?

When I responded to their proposed idea, I had a bit of a surprise: “It's funny you should mention that. I actually had a story idea tickling my brain the last couple of days but I couldn't figure out how to make it work.” Their suggestion made it work. All of the pieces fell into place.

Now all I needed was a title!

First, however, they wanted a chapter.

This gave me pause. What they were asking me to write was a genre I had never written in for novels! I did write one P.I. short story, but I was not familiar enough with the genre to write a novel.

Then I remembered a book I’d read earlier this year called How I Write: Secrets of a Bestselling Author by Janet Evanovich with Ina Yalof. In this book, Janet Evanovich shares how she went from writing romance to mysteries: She spent a year studying the genre before taking the leap into writing her popular Stephanie Plum novels.

Perhaps this is what I should do as well, in order to write the series my publisher has proposed. I will spend a year studying and learning how to write the amateur sleuth genre. For now, I had to start with a first chapter.

I spent the evening writing that first chapter and the next day polishing it before I sent it to my publisher. They liked it and now it looks like I have to write the rest of the book!

That first book will get written and submitted eventually. For now, I have the first chapter of it for readers to enjoy – right at the end of my YA horror story collection that I just self-published!

I have one chapter of that novel written and I do plan to write the rest of it. But first I need to spend a year studying the genre!

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When she’s not writing pet-focused Dawn Colclasure is a writer who lives in Oregon with her husband and children. She is the author and co-author of over two dozen books, among them 365 Tips for Writers: Inspiration, Writing Prompts and Beat the Block Tips to Turbo Charge Your Creativity. She is also a content writer, freelance writer, book reviewer and ghostwriter. She is also a self-publisher. Her stories have appeared in magazines and anthologies. She publishes the SPARREW Newsletter each month. Her websites are at https://dawnsbooks.com/ and https://www.dmcwriter.com/. She’s on Twitter @dawncolclasure.
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Friday Speak Out!: Getting Lost in the Details? Try This Simple Trick

Friday, July 22, 2022
by Elizabeth Maria Naranjo

In the summer of 2017 I began work on what I thought was a short story. It certainly wasn’t going to be a novel. I hadn’t written a novel in two years, and it had been three since my first one debuted.

Part of the problem was I kept getting lost in the details. A book about two boys who run away on a mission to find one’s missing father had me buried in research about volcanism, autism, Catholicism, and the northern Arizona wilderness. Another attempt at a novel, this one a sprawling portal fantasy, produced a notebook’s worth of mythology and worldbuilding but only a chapter of prose.

This time, I thought, I was going to stick with what I did best–something short, something simple.

You probably know where this is going.

The House on Linden Way, a story about a woman who revisits her childhood home and becomes trapped in living memories, grew into a novel. It’s difficult to overstate how relieved I felt at the time, knowing I could still write books. I credit the simplicity of the story, particularly the setting, for my breakthrough.

Because nostalgia is such an important theme in Linden Way, I tapped into memories of my own childhood home; and because Linden Way is also a haunted house story, most of the scenes occur within the house itself. Limiting my setting to a place with which I was intimately familiar–a place where every room, every corner, is lovingly burned into my memory–freed me to focus on what was unfamiliar: the characters, the conflict, and the plot.

The best part of writing fiction is getting to make things up, but “write what you know” can be a useful adage–a gateway to the good stuff. And drawing on real-life places or experiences won’t stifle your creativity; I’ve written four more books since Linden Way, and they all have completely fictionalized settings.

So if you’re stuck, if you find yourself trying over and over to create something wholly from scratch and you’re drowning in the details, choose something familiar. It can be a place, a person, or a memory. Let that be a framework for your story so your imagination can flourish–instead of getting away from you.

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Elizabeth Maria Naranjo is the award-winning author of T
he Fourth Wall and The House on Linden Way. Her short fiction and creative nonfiction have been published in Brevity Magazine, Superstition Review, Fractured Lit, The Portland Review, Hunger Mountain, Hospital Drive, Reservoir Road, Literary Mama, Motherwell, and a few other places. Her stories have been nominated for the Pushcart Prize, Best American Essay, and Best of the Net. All links to Elizabeth's work can be found on her website at elizabethmarianaranjo.com.

The House on Linden Way is now available in print and ebook! Join me in the fall for the blog tour, hosted by Women on Writing.  

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