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Review of Writer's Guidebook: CPR for Dead or Lifeless Fiction by Karen S. Wiesner

Wednesday, March 17, 2021
CPR for Dead or Lifeless Fiction: A Writer's Guide to Deep and Multifaceted Development and Progression of Characters, Plot, and Relationships
will soon be a writer's handbook that all of us will want on our shelves. Lucky for me, I received a review copy from Karen S. Wiesner, the talented author of a few writing craft books. So let's talk about why you may want this book on your shelf! 

If you like writing craft books that make you feel like the author is in the room with you and teaching you how to make your stories and characters better, then this book is perfect. While reading it, I felt as if Karen was in my living room, giving me advice with her helpful and easy to remember acronyms to keep me from boring my readers into falling asleep instead of turning the pages. 

Here's a great example:
A L I V E, and those letters stand for: Animated (evidence of a spark of life in your characters), Living (not just existing, but living a life full of external and internal conflicts), Interacting (dynamic and believable relationships), Vitality and Voice (3-dimensional character attributes), and finally Engaged (characters with objectives and purpose in the story with defined goals and motivations).

So think of some of your favorite characters in the books you read. Are they ALIVE? Now think of your main character--does he or she fit those five characteristics? This is what Karen's book will do for you. Give you helpful tips, like how to diagnose if your characters are ALIVE, and then help you write better characters and plots.

The book is divided into seven chapters, plus an intro and conclusion, and then something very valuable--an appendix full of worksheets. I know this is every writer's dream--at least it is mine. Karen includes worksheets for both plot and character development help. Then there are also worksheets on relationship development between your characters. If you are writing a romance, you'll especially want to check out the "Links in the Chain of Romance Relationship Development Chart." If you don't have those links, then your romance readers will not be happy with you! 

Back to the seven chapters--I think one of the most helpful chapters for any writer at any level is at the beginning of the book, chapter one, where Karen helps you with "ten ways to spot dead or lifeless characters, plots, and relationships." And by dead characters--she's not talking about the dead body on page one of a murder mystery. She means your character is just there, existing on the page. With chapter one, you receive 10 points to look for in your manuscript to diagnose what may be wrong with it. 

Then she goes on to chapter two, where she introduces you to three-dimensional writing and scenes. Karen has a previous book where she talked about those concepts more (Cohesive Story Building). But in CPR, she reviews these strategies for writers, as she gets ready to really dig into your characters (chapter 3), plot (chapter 4), and relationships (chapter 5). 

I like this book so much because of the relationships' sections. A lot of writing craft books about plot and characters don't spend as much time on examining the relationships in the book. But think about it--when you watch a movie or get hooked on a book series, aren't you very interested in the characters and their relationships? I'll just answer for you--Yes! Han Solo and Princess Leia, Ron and Hermione, and Katniss and Peeta...insert any of your favorites in here, and you'll see what I mean. You want the relationships in your plots to stick in readers' minds like these previous ones did for me. 

This writer's craft book helps you diagnose what's wrong with your manuscript, and then fix it with tips and advice from Karen. If you're a fiction writer looking to improve your craft as one of your 2021 goals, then CPR for Dead or Lifeless Fiction is for you! 


Review written by Margo L. Dill, https://www.editor-911.com
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Book Review: Bring Your Fiction to Life by Karen S. Wiesner (and Giveaway!)

Saturday, October 21, 2017
There is no shortage of “how-to” books for aspiring authors. I should know. I’ve spent hours in Barnes and Noble scouring the shelves, looking for the one book which will not only inspire, but will also unlock the creativity lurking inside me. The one book to which will help me become a successful author. I’ve read my fair share, and while most provided a tidbit or two, none really lit a fire under my . . . derriere.

Therefore, when I picked up Bring Your Fiction to Life by Karen Wiesner, I will admit I was a bit skeptical. After all, I’d been writing several years. I’m an English teacher. Surely she would not have some magic formula to fix my writing problems.

Boy, oh boy, was I wrong.

Let’s start with the basics. Her book focuses on aspects every novel needs: characters, plot, and setting. She breaks her book into chapters accordingly, but takes these three elements one step further. She asks her reader to consider the three-dimensional aspects of each category.

Let’s take characters, for instance. It’s not enough to create their likes and dislikes, their hair and eye color. An author needs to consider the present, past, and future self of their characters. These same elements transfer into the plot and the setting. When you look at your work as a living being – so to speak – you add layers. Just as our lives have a past, a present, and a future, so does the “life” of your book.

The result? With Wiesner’s instruction, you’ll have a multi-dimensional book with three-dimensional characters, a solid narrative structure, and rich settings which keep the reader engaged.

My favorite part of Wiesner’s book – besides the clear explanations and the logic behind using three-dimensionality in writing, are her templates. She models how to use the templates – both with published novels and with her own work – helping her reader understand both their function and the benefits of using them. There are four worksheets in Appendix A (for characters, scenes, back-cover blurbs, and development), along with cohesion checklists, scene-by-scene outlines, and goal worksheets. Later, in Appendix B, she provides exercises, where her readers can breakdown passages for practice. Not only is Wiesner explaining the process, but she offers practice to teach mastery. As a teacher, I appreciate the scaffolding.

She provides sound advice for those in the throes of writing. “Don’t neglect your future dimensions when you sketch physical descriptions,” she writes. She stresses the importance of giving each dimension equal time and attention. Later, she suggests using a publishing service to print a hard copy of your final draft, which serves as the “perfect advanced reading copy” to use as a “final read-through.” Throughout, she suggests distancing oneself from your manuscript at key moments, offering a timeline for those who hope to make writing their career.

Wiesner also offers advice for novice, intermediate, and master writers. One can tell that she understands the basic processes of authorship, and she strives to meet her readers at their level.

In the interest of full disclosure, I started writing a new novel just before I picked up Wiesner’s book. By the time I finished reading Bring Your Fiction to Life, I stopped writing and started planning, using the worksheets and charts I’d acquired from her book. She helped me see the importance – and the positive benefits – of creating three-dimensional writing. So much so, in fact, that I feel I cannot move forward without first creating a quality outline with multi-dimensional characters, plot, and setting.

“Everything that happens at the beginning of the book must be linked to something that happens later on,” she writes, and those words continue to resonate with me, as has much of her book.

This is a must-read for beginning and experienced writers.



Review by Bethany Masone Harar

Bethany Masone Harar is an author, teacher, and blogger, who does her best to turn reluctant readers into voracious, book-reading nerds. Check out her blog here and her website here.





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Hitting the Page with a Hybrid Process

Thursday, February 06, 2014

A mosaic of my daily notebook and notes
for my current WIP. I'm using a mixed
approach to get the novel going.
Photo credit | EKHumphrey

In my school days, I nearly always used sentence outlines when writing academic papers. Last year, after reading Karen Wiesner’s books, I started outlining my fiction. But then I ended up spending much of last year writing nonfiction. I’m still not terribly adept at outlining my fiction, so I am using a hybrid method for my current work-in-progress.

Because I’m producing pages for a writers’ group, I’m spending time writing freely—without an outline—to let my characters reveal themselves to me. I’m using the basics of fiction—POV or dialogue, for example—and writing small snippets (mini-scenes almost) in each of those areas to find my characters’ voices.

I’m taking this approach because when I went to start an outline sketch of my protagonist, I wasn’t really sure what I wanted her to be doing or her backstory. Wiesner mentions keeping my creativity “brewing” in the background—I agree. For this novel, I needed to spend more time with my characters percolating before pulling them into an outline. (Perhaps because it is my first fiction project since mid-2013?)

With this current project, I didn’t know what I wanted my protagonist to look like. I knew that many of her activities would be familiar to me because they are the ones I want to establish some specific conflicts within the novel. But she wasn’t coming alive and fully formed to me through the outlining process. Sure, I pinpointed some of her characteristics, but she needed to reveal herself and her fictional friends to me. I don’t know about you, but more often than not, that happens to me when I step back and let my writing take over. Or when I’m stuck.

Now that I’m a couple chapters in, I’m pulling myself out of the narrative to flesh out more of the characters’ stories and characteristics. I’m utilizing Wiesner’s book, but I’m also relying on my own internal compass.

I used an outline for the gluten-free book to keep focused on the areas I needed to cover. The basic outline helped me to thread the needles I laid out for myself. Also, checking off sections as I wrote them and working on a publisher’s deadline helped direct and motivate me. By creating the small snippets, I’m able to borrow those and slot them into the narrative, my outline...and my novel. If they fit, great. If not, I may massage the snippet into place.

Working in this hybrid fashion, I realize how my approach provides me with a feeling of some control and goals as well as letting my creativity and spontaneity loose.

My groaning bookshelves let me know that I’m not unique in figuring out how to plot a course through a novel. But this is a method that, for right now, feels organic and productive to me.

What have you learned that has helped you chart your course through completing a piece of writing? What have you learned—and then tweaked to suit a particular project? What’s working for you right now?

Elizabeth King Humphrey is a writer and editor living in North Carolina. She’s getting back to writing after four days of school closures due to freakish ice masquerading as snow.
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Author Karen Wiesner: Unplugged with The Muffin

Monday, June 10, 2013
For the past few weeks, we've reviewed several of Karen S. Wiesner's books (and held giveaways) on The Muffin, including First Draft in 30 Days, From First Draft to Finished Novel, and Writing the Fiction Series (this giveaway is still going on!). So, to get an idea of the woman behind these excellent writers' reference books, we decided to interview Karen about her writing process and how she became so prolific.

Karen Wiesner is an accomplished author who has penned over 98 books in the past 15 years, which have been nominated and/or won 125 awards. She currently has 38 more under contract, spanning a variety of genres. For more information about Karen and her work, visit her websites at www.KarenWiesner.com, www.FirstDraftin30Days.com, www.falconsbend.com, and www.JewelsoftheQuill.com. You can also sign up for Karen's free e-mail newsletter, Karen's Quill, and become eligible for her monthly book giveaways, by sending a blank e-mail to KarensQuill-subscribe@yahoogroups.com.

Interview by Elizabeth King Humphrey

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WOW: Welcome to The Muffin, Karen! You are obviously successful at writing novels. Why did you decide to turn your skills to books on the craft of writing novels?

Karen: Fiction writing is the heart of who I am as a writer. Not writing simply isn’t an option for me. I have to. It’s as vital as breathing. Even if I’d never gotten published, I would always write if for no one else but myself. Nonfiction, I admit, I write for others, not so much for myself. I realize there’s a need for this crucial information, and I’m happy to provide it for any author who requests it. Having it in book format is convenient and sometimes profitable, lol, but whenever anyone writes to me asking for advice, I respond. To me, it’s a way of giving back to all the generous, experienced authors who helped me along the way.

WOW: Well, we're so glad you decided to give back! Your books are truly helpful. So how long did you write before you discovered what worked?

Karen: I wrote my first book when I was ten years old. That was the summer my family was in Oklahoma, and we discovered this abandoned old trailer with photographs all over the floor. Both my sister (author Linda Derkez) and I got a ton of ideas from looking at these pictures, speculating about who’d lived there and what happened to them. That was the summer I knew I was destined to be a writer. I started brainstorming romances, thrillers, and mysteries in my head. By the time I was sixteen, I’d written almost a dozen books and short stories, and countless poems (one of which was published).

My first book was published in 1997 (Leather & Lace, which has been newly revised and reissued in paperback and electronic formats)—after about ten years of writing. It was then that I realized my seat-of-the-pants method of writing every book from start to finish at least twelve times (taking months and months to complete each of these) was too inefficient. Because once I had a first draft, I always started with the hard part of the writing process. I got the comparably easy part of the way with this directionless first draft and left myself with the torturous work of untangling, sorting out, revising and polishing 400 or more pages—many times, more than once! Sometimes I felt like I spent all my time revising. If I wanted my career to have the momentum necessary to be a success, something had to change.

WOW: Oh gosh, I think many of us have been there with the endless revision stage. What is one of the most essential pieces of advice about novel writing that you think could benefit beginning novel writers?

Karen: Many authors fear that using an outline will kill their enthusiasm for writing the book. In fact, the biggest reason authors don’t use an outline is because of a misplaced fear that their creativity will be hampered or caged by this guide. Nothing could be further from the truth. I’ve never felt stifled by an outline. Just the opposite, in fact. The outline frees me to explore every aspect of a book—without risk. It allows my ideas (and my characters) to come to life on their own and grow. An outline is an absolutely ideal place to explore new characters and story threads. Use your outline to explore any angle you want. If new characters crop up, wonderful! Include them. If they’re not right for the story, getting rid of them won’t take you much time at all. Explore a new story thread—follow wherever it takes you. If it’s a logical thread, keep it. If it’s not, delete it.

WOW: How have the processes you describe in your books helped you to become so prolific?

Karen: Both of my Writer’s Digest books, First Draft in 30 Days and From First Draft to Finished Novel: A Writer’s Guide to Cohesive Story Building, work together perfectly, and those who have read and used both methods say the same. Used together, they really are like a well-oiled machine focused on productivity, high-quality, and unending momentum. Used together, these are the secrets of how I became so prolific. Incidentally, between these two books, I cover every single stage of writing a book in-depth and step-by-step, so each aspect is detailed from start to finish.

The focus of First Draft in 30 Days is outlining and doing it in such a way that the outline is actually the first draft of the book. The initial time I actual go to write the book is similar to my second draft—and generally it does read like a polished manuscript.

One thing From First Draft to Finished Novel really targets is the importance of working in stages. I can’t stress how crucial this is for all authors. In an ideal situation, a writer goes through the following nine stages to get a finished novel:

1. Brainstorming

2. Researching

3. Outlining

4. Setting aside the project

5. Writing the first draft

6. Setting aside

7. Revising

8. Setting aside

9. Editing and polishing (preferably after critique partners have gone over it)


On my website, you’ll find a page that includes my annual works in progress and accomplishments. I encourage writers to visit this page because you’ll really see how well these methods work. I never work on these stages back to back on the same book because that would kill my enthusiasm for the project and wouldn’t be able to progress another layer with it. I would be intimidated about working on the project so exclusively that I can barely get myself to look at it anymore.

There are only three things writers need to do to be productive:

1) Work in stages. (Anyone can learn this, given a little time, and it’s simply logical to work this way. There’s nothing magical or even “hard-wired” about it!)

2) Use annual goals and project goals sheets. (Not difficult to learn at all. First Draft in 30 Days has templates for both of these worksheets and you’ll find a link below to PDF copies of them at the end of this interview.)

3) Sit down and do the work. (No magic formula for this one either, but I play head-games with myself all the time to get my work done. For instance, I tell myself that if finish the work I’m supposed to this morning, I can play a computer or X-Box game all afternoon. Believe me, that’s a huge motivation for me. Find something that motivates you. Motivation lights a fire inside you the way simply lecturing yourself can’t.)

To be fair, I write full-time, and a lot of authors don’t have that luxury. Even still, you can really see using this system that, even if you have only 1 or 2 hours per day to work, you’ll always be progressing and building very solid, high-quality stories. Conceivably, you could double your output in a year’s time while doing some of the best writing you’ve ever done in your life.

WOW: What do you want WOW readers to know about you and your work—both craft books and novels?

Karen: I don’t ever believe you should do more work than you need to. I’ve always said this about my writing methods. If you find yourself getting bogged down (either by the amount of time allotted—too much or too little—to each step, or by an ability to progress with a step), move on to the next step. If you don’t need to follow a particular step in the process because you’ve already done it or it would just be unnecessary for you, you shouldn’t do it. All of this stuff is designed to get writers thinking about areas that they’ve always seen as part of a whole, but that they’ve never before separated from the whole. In the beginning, you may need to perform all of those steps, filling out endless worksheets, etc., as you learn how to sufficiently develop each aspect of a book. The point of all writing methods is to find out how you work best—take what you can, discard the rest—and your goal should always be to get to an instinctive form of working.

Once you’ve used a method like the ones in my two books often enough, you’ll find that a lot of the writing process has become instinctive for you. You’ll understand the importance of solid characterization now, whereas you may have been flying blind before. You’ll comprehend how well-placed descriptions can enhance all the other parts of a book.

Because so much of this has become instinctive for you, you may not have to formally complete setting sketches or plot sketches, etc., anymore. You’ll do those things within the framework of your research and then within the outlining. I promise you, you won’t always have to fill out so many worksheets and checklists to accomplish this—unless you want to continue with them.

The longer you write, the more books you finish, the easier it should become. We grow more adept in our writing the longer we do it. My books First Draft in 30 Days and From First Draft to Finished Novel can give you a solid plan of action to follow until you’ve reached the instinctive stage on your own. If you’ve never written a book before, you’ll need the direction both of my books (and plenty of others) can give you.

If you simply can’t get some portion of your book to work, then all the checklists and exercises should help you figure out where your story is stuck or going wrong. But only do what you feel benefits you and your story. That said, I believe an outline is a crucial layer in developing every story. I don’t really think you can “instinctively” grow out of needing one of those because it’s really the ideal place the hard work of writing a book should be done.


My newest writing reference is Writing the Fiction Series: The Guide for Novels and Novellas available now from Writer’s Digest Books. The definitive guide to crafting a series! With insights from nearly 100 series authors and publishers, as well as "Grow Your Series Muscles" exercises, Writing the Fiction Series is the only book you'll need to write a series that sizzles. Also look for the companion tutorial from Writer’s Digest Tutorials.

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Elizabeth King Humphrey is a writer, editor, coach, and reviewer. She earned her MFA at the University of North Carolina Wilmington and has a certificate in editing from the University of Chicago Graham School. She is currently writing a book about gluten-free eating.

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From First Draft to Finished Novel by Karen S. Wiesner (Review and Giveaway)

Thursday, May 23, 2013
I was fortunate to get to review Karen Wiesner's First Draft in 30 Days before diving into From First Draft to Finished Novel.

In this book on crafting a novel, Wiesner continues to carefully lead you through different layers of the process of writing—and finishing—a novel. Peeling back the layers, Wiesner helps you to set the stage for building a strong and cohesive story. As she does in First Draft in 30 Days, she provides real-life examples from drafts and published novels.

Wiesner puts together a blueprint to follow that starts with setting forth and laying a strong foundation. She encourages brainstorming and then researching. Along the way, Wiesner gives writers the tools to understand how to write their stories. Her appendices include a glossary that helps to explain some of the elements of fiction writing. Wiesner also gives writers the easy-to-follow checklists and exercises to keep on track.

After laying the solid foundation, Wiesner spends two parts putting up the walls of your story. She helps to guide writers through evaluating their own stories, which is essential if you are going to make the story work. Then, thinking in layers, Wiesner suggests how to improve on the foundation and walls of your story.

In the third part, Wiesner helps guide writers in the revision process—giving ideas on how to involve critique groups or partners—through to the final polishing.

Want to sell the novel? Then Wiesner helps you put your proposal together. (I'm not there quite yet!)

Wiesner's style is approachable and friendly. Her advice seems to be vested in you developing the best novel you can. Her examples are contemporary and work to help demonstrate the concepts she's exploring. Her precision focus and guidance should easily help you get from your first draft to a completed novel. Her preparations helped me to look at my work more objectively. She's the writers' coach you wished lived next door to you.

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Karen Wiesner is an accomplished author who has penned over 98 books in the past 15 years, which have been nominated and/or won 125 awards. She currently has 38 more under contract, spanning a variety of genres. For more information about Karen and her work, visit her websites at www.KarenWiesner.com, www.FirstDraftin30Days.com, www.falconsbend.com, and www.JewelsoftheQuill.com. You can also sign up for Karen's free e-mail newsletter, Karen's Quill, and become eligible for her monthly book giveaways, by sending a blank e-mail to KarensQuill-subscribe@yahoogroups.com.


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First Draft in 30 Days by Karen S. Wiesner (Review and Giveaway)

Saturday, May 11, 2013
My bookshelves groan when they see me approach with a new craft book. I have so many that I hesitate to buy one in the bookstore for fear that I actually own a copy and it's just hidden behind a mountain of other books. I was given the opportunity to review Karen S. Wiesner's First Draft in 30 Days: A Novel Writer's System for Building a Complete and Cohesive Manuscript and I think I can probably unburden my bookshelves.

Wiesner's book is good with a solid and doable process. And, honestly, the book reads like a friend who is telling you how to write your draft . . . a good friend, not one who will leave you in the lurch.

I took the challenge of trying to write a first draft in 30 days following her method. I admit that I did OK keeping to her schedule and worksheets, but that's just because I had a week where I got off kilter (which is not Wiesner's fault, obviously! I blame that on my kids . . . ) But the process was easy to pick up again, even after a brief hiatus.

What makes First Draft in 30 Days so essential is that even when Wiesner is explaining the basics of structure, you can't help but learn something. With each element that she explains, she illustrates it with excerpts from fiction you've probably read or, if you haven't, it's been on your list to read. Also, even if you are doing some of what Wiesner suggests, such as keeping a project folder, Wiesner illustrated how to organize your system so that it works for—not against—you and your book.

Wiesner's days are grouped into six "crucial" areas, so chapter three, for example, includes days 7 to 13, when she suggests you research your idea. By day 30, you are revising the formatted outline that provides your novel with its solid frame helping you to, as Wiesner writes, "lay out the full course of the story as it flows from beginning to end." She recommends using this full outline to set the stage for your second draft. This outline keeps your plot more focused and helps to avoid any pitfalls.

What worked for me with Wiesner's approach is that she gives you the steps—even providing the worksheets and schedules in her appendices—and encouragement for setting writing goals. Both are incredible for getting started on a novel or even with revising a novel.

Even if you aren't sure that you want to follow an outline method, such as Wiesner proposes, First Draft in 30 Days gave me some insight I needed about writing fiction. In fact, I found myself making notes on how to revise a work-in-progress while drafting another manuscript!

A WOW! colleague told me she hoped Wiesner's book got my pen really moving. It did and much more.

It's not surprising; Karen Wiesner is an accomplished author who has penned over 98 books in the past 15 years, which have been nominated and/or won 125 awards. She currently has 38 more under contract, spanning a variety of genres. Talk about prolific! For more information about Karen and her work, visit her websites at www.KarenWiesner.com, www.FirstDraftin30Days.com, www.falconsbend.com, and www.JewelsoftheQuill.com. You can also sign up for Karen's free e-mail newsletter, Karen's Quill, and become eligible for her monthly book giveaways, by sending a blank e-mail to KarensQuill-subscribe@yahoogroups.com.

In a couple weeks, I'll review Wiesner's From First Draft to Finished Novel: A Writer's Guide to Cohesive Story Building. I can't wait!

Elizabeth King Humphrey is a writer and editor living in coastal North Carolina. She is now dividing her life into 30-day first draft segments to see how many books she can write for the rest of her life.


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