Interview with Cate Touryan, Runner Up in the WOW! Q1 2025 Essay Contest

When she isn’t editing or teaching technical writing, Cate Touryan writes short fiction, creative nonfiction, and novels. Her debut YA novel, Turning Toward Eden, is slated for a 2025 spring release. Cate’s work has won second place and an honorable mention in past Women on Writing contests. Her recent creative nonfiction piece, published in Under the Sun, has been nominated for a Pushcart Prize as well as for inclusion in The Best American Essays, 2025. You can read her essay here.

Cate lives on California’s foggy but beautiful central coast with her husband, the sweet spirit of her Yorkie, and a rafter of turkeys—as in both a whole bunch of them and in the rafters.

To connect with Cate, head to her website or Facebook page or send her an email. She loves to hear from her readers.

Interview by Jodi M. Webb

WOW: Congratulations on being a runner up in the Q1 2025 Creative Nonfiction Essay Contest for Beyond the Safari Sunset. The imagery is so rich I felt like I was watching a slideshow, not reading. Any insights on how you make your writing so incredibly descriptive?

CATE: That’s a lovely compliment, thank you. As a reader, I most admire that writing which perfectly melds form, function, and fabric such that the narrative transcends the telling and becomes a work of art in itself, an astonishment. I’m not there yet, more miss than hit, but continue to work toward a mastery of craft. To render physical setting well, I rely on conventional advice: infuse scenes with relevant sensory detail, tease out nuanced meaning through juxtaposition, backlight the symbolic, and much more.

But to render description immersive—that’s my ultimate goal, requiring me to reach beyond the physical, intellectual, and symbolic characteristics of a place. To harness the power of setting demands that I see the landscape, for example, as an indispensable thread in the story, not a character so much as a revelatory shading or texturizing. Even that—the descriptive as immersive—has a greater goal: to make my story yours, the distinction between us lost as we converge into one shared moment.

WOW: What made you decide to submit this piece to the contest? 

CATE: There’s something about putting a pet down that, as if not heartrending enough, brings mortality front and center, speaking to the loss of all things. We can, as the story illustrates, try to hem in those we love, prolong their wilted lives, concoct workarounds, tether them with unbreakable love, yet nothing can stave off the inevitable. It may be a fact of life that all things eventually perish, will be lost, but that doesn’t mean we aren’t driven by some fierce force to hold on. Death is anathema to us; though of perishable bodies, we have been set with eternity in our hearts (Ecclesiastes 3:11). Trying to come to terms with the loss of Wee Willie Winkie meant revisiting the permeating sorrows of this life. And as writers do, I wrestled with those sorrows in story, refusing to let loss have the last word and perhaps doing the one thing we can do: make beauty from ashes. It just so happened that a last-call email from WOW provided the impetus I needed to put fingers to keyboard.

WOW: Yes, I agree that a looming deadline can give us the extra nudge to write. Do you frequently enter writing contests? 

CATE: I don’t, entering maybe a half-dozen essays for WOW over the years, but I do have a

wonderful story to tell with a shoutout to two tremendously kind and encouraging editors, Angela Mackintosh and Martha Highers.

When a CNF essay I submitted to WOW last year made it to the finals but no farther, I reached out to a WOW editor to ask if the topic was too political for the contest. She thought not and pointed me to the literary journal Under the Sun, saying its editor-in-chief had recently written her own piece on the same topic. Even though my entry was too short at 1,000 words for their preferred style, what would it hurt? The editor-in-chief liked it enough to ask me to expand it. After nine months of collaborative work, my now 3,000-word essay was published and subsequently nominated for a Pushcart Prize as well as for a 2025 Best American Essays selection. As if that wasn’t honor enough, I was asked to be a reader for Under the Sun and am now working with authors we’d like to publish, paying it forward as it were. I am loving the behind-the-scenes reading and editing and can’t speak highly enough of the terrific team rooting for every submission.

Not making it past the finals in the WOW contest was a blessing in disguise. There is reward ahead for those who persevere.

WOW: Pushcart Prize and American Essay! That is an incredible story. And a wonderful example of how we all, in our turn, lift our fellow writers up. On your website, you write that you reach for "....the beginning beyond The End." Can you share what that means to you?

CATE: Simply explained, I write stories, fictional and otherwise, where real life meets real faith.

While we cannot see beyond this temporal life—and indeed, many believe there is nothing to see—I believe we catch glimpses of another story that awaits us after “the end,” a story of redemption and the renewal of all things. Or as the apostle Paul put it far more eloquently, “the things which are seen are temporal; but the things which are not seen are eternal.” Christianity provides, if not the easiest, safest, or most popular life, the only one that offers both meaning to our own stories and the promise of a story beyond our own. I write to capture glimpses of that which lies beyond our temporal vision, to offer that which has brought my life both purpose and hope.

WOW: What an inspirational look at your writing process. So, what's your next big writing project?

CATE: I’m excited to be launching my debut historical YA novel, Turning Toward Eden, along with the audiobook in May. It’s a crossover in many ways—historical, mystery, coming-of-age, small town, YA/women’s, not fitting neatly into any particular genre, but with appeal to those who enjoy a good story with heart. I have a middle grade novel in the works as well as more creative nonfiction, perhaps my favorite format.

WOW: You are busy! What is your upcoming novel about?

CATE: When chasing another is easier than facing yourself. It’s 1971. The Cold War has cast a chill over the hot summer of California’s central coast. Caught in her parents’ own cold war, 14-year-old Eden is strapped with caring for her severely disabled brother until the arrival of a mysterious Russian immigrant unleashes a rash of escalating crimes. Rumors swirl: the “commie” is to blame . . . and Eden is her accomplice. Determined to prove her innocence, Eden embarks on a reckless game of chase—even if it means risking her brother’s life. Stumbling upon the girl’s secret, she unearths her own. But will it be too late to save her brother?

To read the short story prequel, set in 1910, please visit my website and subscribe to my quarterly newsletter.

WOW: I 'm signing up today because I can't resist a sneak peek inside a new world.

CATE: Thank you for inviting me to share about my creative process and works. It’s an honor!

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Meet Cate Touryan, Second Place Winner in the Spring 2017 Flash Fiction Contest

Like many others, Cate always wanted to be a writer when she grew up—and a writer she became. Except not the kind of writer she’d envisioned. With an MA in English and a JD in law, she built a career as a technical writer, editor, university instructor, and business owner. Five years ago, she moved back to her hometown of San Luis Obispo, California, from a long stint in Sacramento, leaving her career (mostly) behind and returning to fiction.

When she’s not editing engineering reports or teaching technical writing for forensic scientists in the crime labs, she is working on short stories, creative nonfiction, and a second novel. She lives with her husband and daughter a stone’s throw from her childhood home (and her mom), and recently secured an agent for her first novel. She has found that the best way to live each day is by taking walks with her dog (and her mom) and by faith.

To connect with Cate, please find her here...

connect@catetouryan.com

Website: catetouryan.com
Facebook: facebook.com/catetouryan
Twitter: twitter.com/catetouryan


interview by Renee Roberson

WOW:  Cate, congratulations on placing in the contest and welcome! On your website you discussed how your winning entry, " A Note in the Margin," was inspired by a dear friend and neighbor of yours who suffered from progressive aphasia. Was this a difficult piece to write being so close to home?

Cate: If there’s an authentic way to write about things that aren’t close to home, I’d like to know about it! Yes, it was close to home, both because “Maggie” (Theresa) was my friend and neighbor for almost 20 years and also because she was a writer, a fellow artist. So, yes, on several levels, it was difficult, but what was far more difficult was watching a brutal disease rob a gifted, accomplished poet of her words and a remarkable woman of herself—as well as to watch a son lose his mother, a husband his wife. I intended the story as a tribute to her and to them, to the way she lived and to the way she died. And, of course, I very much wanted not just to write but to share her story—her strength, her beauty, her sorrow. A story is not as good as its number of readers, but a good story only finds completion when read. Thus, my immense gratitude to WOW for the opportunity to give the story readers.

When I learned that the story had made it through the first round, I emailed Theresa’s husband to tell him I’d written a piece dedicated to his wife and telling a fictionalized version of her story, concerned that its publication might pain him. He responded with gratitude, saying, “The story honors her and the outward humility and dignity with which she faced her illness,” which was exactly what I’d hoped.

He also asked if I’d attended the poetry reading I describe in the story. I hadn’t, but she had told me about it, about her words disappearing, slurring. She was surprisingly open with me about her diagnosis, and while I tried to remain encouraging and sympathetic, I recoiled with every detail she shared, stunned that she, a poet, writer, and a speaker, of all people, would lose her words. And as a fellow writer, I couldn't think of a worse fate. The least I could do was honor her with the very thing she’d lost.

Writing this story was my gathering and laying of flowers for a friend. But it was also more than that: it was a way to work through my own heartache. Writing often takes both the writer and the reader on a redemptive journey, and that journey, I find, compels much of my writing.

WOW: What a fitting tribute to Theresa's life, and something for her family to also cherish in her absence. Switching gears, you also work as a writing consultant and have edited many technical, business and scientific documents. How do you separate writing and editing technical documents from your creative writing endeavors? They are so vastly different!

Cate: Yes, well, one must resist the urge to wax poetic while discussing strategies to minimize business interruption risks from cable tray fires in power plants. My master’s degree is in English, with my emphasis in creative writing, so I fell into technical writing quite by accident. In some ways, technical writing is much easier than fiction writing. It’s factual, straightforward, efficient, concise, relies on common sense, plain English, and a solid understanding of grammar and style. You do need to be creative, but not in conceiving ideas, rather in presenting them most effectively to the intended audience. Creative writing, on the other hand, requires you to partner with God. I say that only somewhat facetiously, echoing Madeleine L’Engle’s sentiments in Walking on Water: “God is constantly creating, in us, through us, with us, and to co-create with God is our human calling.”

As far as how I separate technical writing and editing from my creative writing endeavors, the answer is “very poorly.” It’s a hopeless affair. I simply do the one when deadlines loom at the engineering firm or crime lab and do the other when I can procrastinate just a bit longer. But the shifting of gears can be heard several blocks away, I assure you.

WOW: I love that. So honest! We'd also love to hear about your work designing a program teaching technical writing for forensic scientists. What did that entail?

Cate: After I earned my MA in English, I taught academic writing for the Sacramento community colleges part-time for ten years. At 35, I entered law school, graduated at 38, took and passed the California bar, and then six weeks shy of my 40th birthday had my second daughter.
Instead of practicing law or returning to the college campus, I found myself given an unexpected opportunity: teaching business writing to employees of government agencies. Living in the state capital with its hub of government agencies, I was in the right place at the right time. One of these agencies was the Sacramento County Crime Lab, which sought an instructor with education in both English and law. Voila, my career in forensic science was born! Eventually, I was asked to develop a writing course for the California Criminalistics Institute, which I’ve taught now for almost 20 years and which I’ve taken to many crime labs throughout the state. After many years teaching that course, I was invited to develop a course for the newly instated Master of Forensic Science program at the University of California, Davis, Extension. No one has been more surprised at how my career path evolved than I!

WOW:  Please tell us more about your upcoming novel, "Turning Toward Eden." Is it a young adult book?

Cate: Quite possibly! But I hope it’s more and crosses ages and genders. It’s for anyone who ever descended into adolescence and resurfaced (questionable for some perhaps), for anyone who loves a coming-of-age story or just a good story. Set in a small California beach town in 1971, it’s a little bit mystery, a little bit adventure, a little bit teenage angst, a little bit xenophobia, a lot bit redemption, and dedicated to my brother who is severely disabled and who inspired one of the characters. The tagline is “When chasing another is easier than facing yourself.”

(And the logline is “After her father walks out, a resentful 14-year-old finds herself burdened with a secret shame and trapped in a family she no longer wants. When an elusive stranger is rumored to be behind a series of disturbing events that rattle the town, she sets out to discover the stranger’s secret only to find that the enemy she chases is herself and the secret her own.”)

As exciting as the novel is (of course I’m going to say that!), the story behind the novel is worth telling for the encouragement I hope it offers other writers. I began writing the novel 20 years ago, but worked on it only sporadically over the next two decades, my time devoted to caring for my family and building my business as an editor and writing instructor—a tale familiar to many working mothers, I think. In late summer 2015, six of my high school friends gathered in my home for a weekend of reminiscing and girl fun, kayaking, shopping coastal boutiques, sitting by the firepit under the stars. Eight weeks later, one of these friends was diagnosed with kidney cancer, and three weeks later, she was gone.

As we’d sat around the firepit, she had shared so many hopes and dreams for her upcoming year, taking ballroom dancing classes, writing songs, flying to Paris in the spring with her mother. So many of us live for that day “when.” That’s what I was doing, waiting for that day when I could devote myself to writing and finish that languishing novel.

Reeling from her unexpected death, I took a page from Alice (in Wonderland) and boxed my own ears, determining that before my 60th birthday the next year, I’d complete the novel, never mind whether it was good or not—and by then I was pretty sure it wasn’t. It would be a gift to myself and a tribute to my childhood friend. My resolve got a huge boost when a couple months later an excerpt won the Grand Prize at the 2016 San Francisco Writing Contest. If I wanted to back out now, I couldn’t. Expectations were running high that I finish the story. And finish the story I did. Anything beyond that—securing an agent, finding a publisher, entertaining readers—is icing on the cake. Of course, some of us prefer icing to cake, but the truth is that doing what you set out to do is its own very sweet success. And yes, it can happen even at 60. But don’t wait for the “when.”

WOW: Thank you so much for this interview, Cate! Before you go, can you share with us what you are writing these days?

Cate: I’ve just finished a creative nonfiction piece (and thus I’m very glad to see that category added to the WOW contests), a category new to me, much like flash fiction, which I learned about only in the last two years—my head’s been buried too long in tech writing obviously. I also have a middle grade novel I’m sketching out—two, actually. As much fun as I think writing those will be, I think they might be delay tactics for another adult novel that’s been brewing for a while. Then again, until we try, I don’t think we really know what our strongest suit is. That’s one of the wonderful things about writing—discovering how best to say what it is we want to say.

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