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B.O.A.T. by Alexandria Pall: Reader Review Event & Giveaway

Monday, March 04, 2024
BOAT by Alexandria Pall

Today, I'm excited to announce a special reader review event with Alexandria Pall. Our readers will share their thoughts about her incredible paranormal romance, B.O.A.T. You'll also have a chance to win a copy of this incredible book.

But first, here's more about Alexandria's book:


Seventeen-year-old April has spent her childhood in therapy, learning to dismiss her imaginary friends as just that: imaginary. Now, as a college freshman, she hopes to leave behind the whispers and cruel rumors that have plagued her for years.

When April begins to embrace her newfound independence, her world is turned upside down when she crosses paths with Tommy and Bobby, two figures her therapist insisted were figments of her imagination.

Nineteen-year-old Tommy has spent his life waiting for a mission that has haunted him. April’s reappearance shatters his reality, prompting him, April and Bobby to uncover a hidden truth that will change everything.

The trio must unite to fulfill their destiny. But an ominous force is closing in on them, one that will stop at nothing to prevent them from completing their mission. The stakes grow darker, threatening not only their lives but the wellbeing of future generations.

With time running out and the world’s fate hanging in the balance, fitting in will be the least of April’s concerns. She will need to confront the demons of her past and present, fighting for what she cherishes most.

Publisher: FriesenPress
ISBN-10: 1039189369
ISBN-13: 978-1039189355
ASIN: B0CPTBMJZK
Print Length: 386 pages

Purchase a copy on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, or Bookshop.org. Be sure to add it to your GoodReads reading list as well.


B.O.A.T. by Alexandria Pall Reader Reviews

Here Is What WOW's Readers Thought

"This is such a fantastic read - engaging is probably the best word to describe the experience. I enjoyed the characters and storyline as well as Pall's writing style. I would be interested in other books by this author and felt “B.O.A.T" was a relaxing reading experience!" ~ Crystal Otto

"This isn't the type of book I normally read but I did find the premise interesting. Also, because the main character has a history of mental illness there is always the question of what is real and what is a creation of her mind. There were new revelations throughout the book that made me want to keep reading to unravel this puzzle. In fact, this entire book felt like a puzzle (which I love). Instead of just passively reading to find out what happens, I was drawn into the puzzles the characters were trying to solve, trying to figure out what the solutions were, what things meant, what was real or imagined. I wonder if Pall will be writing more about this hidden community?" ~ Jodi Webb

"What a fascinating read! There isn't enough books that talk about imaginary friends and the possibilities that they are indeed very real. I loved what the author did here. Her character development was strong, and it kept me guessing the whole way through. I am definitely hoping the author writes more in this series. If you love puzzles and intrigue, I think you'll love this book." ~ Nicole Pyles

"B.O.A.T is the author debut of Alexandria Pall. Overall it was a good read. If you like Young Adult fiction, which many adults do, and easy to follow wording, then you’ve found your book. By ‘easy to follow wording’ I don’t mean simple, I mean Pall doesn’t try to cram unnecessary words in where simpler is sometimes better. (So King says, well in his own words.)...

...You have three friends... former friends... new friends? We meet our female protagonist, April, first. She’s been led to believe that the voices she’s heard and the imaginary friends she knew means she mentally unstable. Then the doors open, the slow motion begins, flips of hair, and the heavens rain down on her world.

That means those imaginary friends of hers are now on the same campus as she is. Coincidence?

You might find you become attached to supporting cast members and want more of them. That’s up to Pall if she wants to do another book.

The story will lead you one way only to throw you another. Twists, turns, and flips make for an entertaining read..." ~ Ronovan H.

"As someone who has 'talked to herself' for years, having what are considered imaginary friends being real is interesting. A nice coming-of-age story pitting 3 friends against...? Enjoyable read and being passed on to a 'real' 17 year old who would probably enjoy the story too." ~ Judy Hudgins

"B.O.A.T. is a captivating book that held my attention through the whole thing. I love the plot twist, and the book is well-paced. You do not have to worry about getting lost as you read the book. "B.O.A.T." is a wonderful read, with well-developed and interesting characters...[It] is Alexandria Pall's first novel, and I can not wait to see what she writes next." ~ Jill Sheets

About the Author, Alexandria Pall

Everyone starts somewhere. This is Alexandria Pall’s first novel. Follow her online at https://www.alexandriapall.com/.

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Witching Moon by K.E. Bonner: Blog Tour & Giveaway

Monday, December 19, 2022

We're excited to announce the blog tour for Witching Moon by K.E. Bonner. Join us as we share more about this novel, interview the author, and give away a copy of the book. This book is perfect for tweens, teens, and readers who enjoy historical fantasy. 

Before we interview the author, here's a bit more about the book:

Every once in an eon, when the Earth eclipses the moon on a winter solstice, an immortal is born under a witching moon. Anne has always had the strangest feelings—memories she couldn’t place; strangers she inexplicably yearned for. After she rescues the enigmatic Phillip from a shipwreck, her comfortable life on the island of Cusabo is shattered, and the mystery of her destiny starts to fall into place. Anne leaves behind the life she’s always known and sets out with Phillip on an arduous journey to Amaranth, where her ancient family awaits her. But the path is dark and daunting, and Anne’s powers have only just begun to manifest.

Publisher: Belle Isle Books
ASIN: B096ST3G4Z
ISBN-10: 1947860925
ISBN-13: 978-1947860926
Print Length: 298 pages

You can purchase a copy of Witching Moon on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Bookshop.org. You can also add Witching Moon to your Goodreads reading list.  

About the Author, K.E. Bonner 

K. E. Bonner, author of Witching Moon, was always the first kid to sit down during a spelling bee. It wasn’t until she was an adult that she was diagnosed with dyslexia, which explained why she always had to study three times harder than her peers. Being dyslexic taught her perseverance and kindness, her two favorite attributes. She lives in Georgia with her husband, two sons, and two dogs. When not writing, she loves to read, swim, explore new places, and meet fascinating people. If you have a dog, she would love to scratch behind its ears and tell it what a good pup it is. 

Learn more about K.E. Bonner on her website or follow her on Instagram @kebonnerwrites. 

---- Interview by Michelle Cornish 

WOW: Congratulations on your book! I enjoyed reading about Anne and her family, and I especially enjoyed the time period. Witching Moon is set in the late 1800s during the American Civil War. What type of research did you do in order to write a story set during this time period?

KE: Growing up in South Carolina I was surrounded by Revolutionary War and Civil War history. It wasn't uncommon to go to a friend's house and see a saber or rifle that their great-grandpappy had carried into battle. Most everyone's grandparents told tales of the hard times that followed the war, so you could say I was raised on Civil War history. I did read several Civil War history books, and watched Ken Burns' excellent documentary on the Civil War, where I learned about Sherman's neckties and slave catchers. History has always been my favorite subject because it is story based, and I am a sucker for a good story.

WOW: History is full of stories, for sure. Writing a novel can be a time consuming endeavor. How do you make time to write and how do you motivate yourself to keep going?

KE: It took me over ten years to write Witching Moon. During that time my husband's business went bankrupt, we lost our home to foreclosure, my husband went into congestive heart failure, had open heart surgery, and almost died. We raised two sons, I worked fifty plus hours a week as an anesthetist, and a thousand other things happened. Although I didn't begin writing as a means to escape the stress, looking back on it, I believe that I persisted in writing to escape to another world that I had some control over. I designated every Sunday as my writing day. I got up early, made my coffee, and decamped to my basement office to write, read, and dream. During that crazy time I often took a month or two off from writing because life got too hectic, but I always went back to my book. Writing keeps me sane, it helps me put life into perspective.

WOW: What an amazing journey you've been on. You certainly went through a lot during the time you were writing Witching Moon! What is your top writing advice for aspiring authors?>

KE: Quite simply, the more you read and write, the better you get. Talent and inspiration will only get you so far, developing a solid routine of putting your butt in a chair and writing everyday is the only way to get better. Focus on the craft of writing: voice, dialogue, pacing, world building, structure, and characterization.

WOW: Sounds like consistency is the key to a solid writing routine. Do you consider yourself a plotter, a pantser, or somewhere in-between? What is your writing process like?

KE: I wish I were a plotter, and to some degree I am, but once I start writing the story takes on a life of its own and I just become the typist; that's magical realism at work. I have a loose plot figured out in my head, and I jot down notes in a notebook, but the story always changes and new characters appear out of nowhere, so I try to be nimble. I'm more of a pantser, but wish I were a plotter. I'm the person who tries to build the Lego castle without the instructions. 

WOW: Speaking of magical realism, this plays a big part in your story. What was your inspiration for this? 

KE: I'm a big believer in everyday magic. When you're in the habit of creating art, you begin to see that there are no coincidences, and that enchantments surround us. Ideas are magical. When an idea presents itself to me I get lit up; my spine tingles, my heart races, and I can become breathless and dizzy. Have you ever felt that tingle down your spine when you hear an amazing piece of music, or have that buzz of instant connection upon meeting someone? That is magic working into your life. 

WOW: Yes, I love it when those spine tingles happen! Which authors or favorite books inspire your writing? 

KE: Pat Conroy is my favorite southern writer. His novel, The Water is Wide is inspiring. I also love Rick Bragg, Flannery O'Conner, Ray Bradbury, Stephen King and George Orwell. Animal Farm is my hands down, absolute favorite book. I love the classics, and am a Jane Austin fangirl. Where The Wild Things Are is my favorite children's book. Everything I read seeps into my writing in some way.

WOW: What was your favorite genre to read when you were growing up and why? 

KE: Even though I was a slow reader, I was a voracious one. I loved Judy Blume, I still love Judy Blume. My favorite genre was anything with a coming of age theme, but really I just read whatever caught my eye: Mad magazine, Cracked magazine, Rolling Stone, Jane Eyre, The Chocolate War. 

WOW: I love that! Do you have a favorite writing spot? Tell us about it and why you love it so much.

KE: I am a big fan of Rockvale Writer's Colony in College Grove, Tennessee. At home I move between the kitchen table, my desk, and the couch. I love to prop my feet up and write semi-reclined. 

WOW: Sounds wonderful. Witching Moon is full of so many themes like leaving home, coming of age, religion, the Underground Railroad, and the Cusabo Indian Tribe (just to name a few). Is this something you thought about before you started writing, and how did you balance the themes throughout the story? 

KE: Most of the themes appeared as I was telling the story. I knew I wanted to write a coming of age story, but as the other themes began to show themselves, I would go back and flesh them out as I edited my work. In the end, I made a list of all the themes that had sprung up, and made sure that they threaded nicely throughout the story. For instance, I first read about the Cusabo Indian Tribe of South Carolina on a placard when my family visited Ellis Island. The Cusabo people were living along coastal South Carolina when European explorers showed up. I had to go all the way to Ellis Island to discover the Cusabo Indians. That little spark of magic brought Mama Jane and Ruth into Witching Moon, and gave me the name of the island where Anne was raised. 

WOW: You were diagnosed with dyslexia as an adult. How has this journey impacted your experiences as an author? 
 
KE: Dyslexia has taught me persistence. For many years I'd known that I had to study three times as hard as my peers to get the same grades. I couldn't cram for an exam, I had to begin studying a few days out. Maybe that is why I don't enjoy plotting a book. I love when ideas spill out of my head and land on the page. Having dyslexia allows me to see things from different angles, so in many ways it opens me up to new possibilities, which is a good thing. 

WOW: Persistence and the ability to see things from different angles certainly are great skills to have as a writer. Will we be seeing more from Anne and her friends? Can you share what you are working on next? 

KE: I do want to write a follow up book for Anne. Because immortal septs fight each other under the guise of mortal wars, the next Witching Moon book will be set during WWI. I have it loosely outlined.

Right now I am working on a book about Daufuskie Island, South Carolina. In the early 1900s, before there were child labor laws, children were sent there to work in the seafood industry. Daufuskie has a rich history: Black Beard the pirate sailed the waters around the island, some say the island is haunted, and it is part of the Gullah Geechee cultural area. My next book is a tale of survival about two children who are sent to work on the island during oyster season. 

WOW: We will certainly be watching for those stories! Thank you so much for joining us today. All the best to you! 

Witching Moon Blog Tour

---- Blog Tour Calendar

December 19th @ The Muffin
Join WOW as we celebrate the launch of K.E. Bonner's blog tour of Witching Moon. Read an interview with the author and enter to win a copy of the book!

December 20th @ Mindy McGinnis’s blog
Stop by Mindy’s blog to read “Release the Idea of Getting Rich or Published and Focus on Your Craft.” by K.E. Bonner

December 21st @ All the Ups and Downs
Join Heather as she spotlights Witching Moon. Enter to win a copy of the book!

December 23rd @ Michelle Cornish’s blog
Visit Michelle’s blog to read her review of Witching Moon.

December 24th @ A Storybook World
Join Deirdra as she features a spotlight of Witching Moon.

December 27th @ Lisa Haselton’s Reviews and Interviews blog
Join Lisa for an interview with K.E. Bonner.

December 28th @ Author Anthony Avina’s blog
Join us today for author Anthony Avina’s review of Witching Moon.

December 29th @ Rockin’ Book Reviews
Join us as Lu Ann reviews Witching Moon. Stop by and enter to win a copy of the book!

December 30th @ Author Anthony Avina’s blog
Revisit author Anthony Avina’s blog to read “The Best Writing Advice I Received” by K.E. Bonner. 

January 4th @ Bev Baird’s blog
Join us on Bev’s blog as she reviews Witching Moon.

January 5th @ The Knotty Needle
Stop by for Judy’s review of Witching Moon.

January 6th @ Bev Baird’s blog
Meet us back at Bev’s blog for “Ideas are Everywhere” a guest post by K.E. Bonner.

January 6th @ Look to the Western Sky
Join Margo as she reviews Witching Moon by K.E. Bonner.

January 7th @ Chapter Break
Visit Julie's blog where she interviews author K.E. Bonner about her book Witching Moon.

January 9th @ Sue Edwards’s blog
Visit Sue’s blog to read “Magical Realism Surrounds Us” by K.E. Bonner.

January 10th @ Celtic Lady's Reviews
Visit Kathleen's blog and read her review of Witching Moon by K.E. Bonner.

January 10th @ World of My Imagination
Stop by Nicole's blog where K.E. Bonner is a guest for "Three Things on a Saturday Night."

January 12th @ Life According to Jamie
Join us as Jamie reviews Witching Moon

January 14th @ Boots, Shoes, and Fashion
Join Linda as she interviews author K.E. Bonner.

January 15th @ Fiona Ingram’s author blog
Stop by Fiona’s blog to see her spotlight feature of Witching Moon

January 16th @ the Freeing the Butterfly blog
Visit Freeing the Butterfly to read “Life is Short, Do What You Love” by K.E. Bonner.

January 18th @ Jill Sheets’s blog
Stop by Jill’s blog to read her interview with K.E. Bonner.


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Amazing YA with Gila Green and an Update on Her Australian Publisher

Wednesday, March 11, 2020
Many of you will know Gila Green because you've taken a WOW! class with her, read an article she's written for us, or watched one of her video posts, where she explained an important element of flash stories to you.  I was lucky enough to be asked to read her latest young adult novel, No Entry, and provide a blurb for the cover. The novel deals with elephant poaching, terrorism, teenage love, finding your identity, and so much more. I was honored. I wound up writing an entire review, and I want to share it with you today for a couple reasons:

1. If you are a young adult writer, you need to read good young adult fiction--read Gila Green.
2. Gila's publisher was located in Australia. Gila wrote to me and said this, "Stormbird burned to the ground and was evacuated in the Australian fires. They can use all the support available. They hope to rebuild and reopen in April. " This is devastating! Can you imagine being that publisher or those authors?

On Stormbird Press's website, they wrote, "In the aftermath, Stormbird Press is in the process of finding solutions (financial, marketing, and logistical) to help us get back on our feet. In the immediate short-term this means that:
  • All stock (physical books) have been lost to the fire.
  • As a result of loss of premises, equipment, and the need for key staff to rebuild their homes and lives, the press is unable to publish new books until later in 2020.
  • Although we utilise print-on-demand technology, there may be delays in posting hard copy books.
  • Beyond the short-term, Stormbird Press is rebuilding and planning for a climate-changed future. We intend to survive and thrive."
You can buy Gila's wonderful book as an ebook and help support this lovely press. More info on that after the review. 

Here's what I thought about Gila's book:


No Entry is a timely, beautiful, and complicated young adult novel written by Gila Green, a masterful storyteller, about a Canadian high school student who spends the summer at South Africa’s Kruger National Park after her brother’s death and her parents’ move to Africa. Yael Amar has a lot to deal with, as do so many teenagers today. She’s trying to navigate life apart from her steady boyfriend while taking advantage of an opportunity to study in the elephant conservation program with Clara Smith, a well-respected conservationist and program director, plus worrying about her parents and their grief, as well as her own. She suffers from some self-esteem issues and the green-eyed monster when she compares herself with her stunning new best friend, Nadine. But aside from the pain over losing her brother in a terrorist attack, the beginning of her story mirrors many teenagers who spend summers in internships, navigating new relationships while missing old ones.

This is a definite strength of Green’s writing. She creates a main character and a situation that any reader could see themselves in. Plus, she writes about problems her readers will be familiar with: friend drama, boyfriend insecurities, fitting in at a new place, and following their passions.

Yael, though--out of nowhere, one routine day at Kruger while with her native guide Sipho--is thrown into the world of elephant poaching and the fear, violence, and greed surrounding this horrifying crime that takes place all too often in this animal’s native land. Yael tries to keep what she sees and experiences to herself because Sipho is afraid of losing his job; and they are both frightened of the men who use violence and intimidation to maim and kill elephants on the land that’s supposed to protect them.

Yael is full of anxiety over what to do and grief for these beautiful animals. Questions rack her mind: Should she share what happened to Sipho and her with her boyfriend? Does Clara know more than she’s letting on? What about Nadine? Who can she trust? She misses her brother and mourns her life before her exposure to the elephant poachers and the terrorist attack turned her world upside down.

Not only does the author tackle teenage issues and the elephant poaching epidemic in Africa, but Green also does an amazing job of exposing her readers to the culture of South Africa—both inside and outside of Kruger. The novel opens in Johannesburg, South Africa, with Yael staying with her aunt and uncle. Before her uncle drives her to Kruger, they stop by Rosebank, which her aunt describes as “a mall with a roof market on Sundays. Lovely crafts, jewelry, and live African music. A
real vibe.”

While at Rosebank amongst “energetic street dancers,” Yael is drawn to a British photographer who asks her, “Are you here to shop or do you want to learn something about South Africa?” When she enters his exhibit, she sees pamphlets about animal rights and views walls of photos of wildlife: waterbuck; Long-tailed Paradise Whydah (a fire-engine-rednecked bird with a bright yellow stomach, a black head, and a matching long, black tail); and an adult rhino with a horn removed “by conservationists.” And then she comes to the second wall with an exhibit of photos titled “Elephant Poaching.” Yael’s experience at the mall is a definite foreshadowing of what’s to come later in the novel.

“They kill them for their tusks, for their ivory,” Douglas says to her. “Most of the ivory finds its way to Asia in an organized and ruthless global trade, and some of it finds its way to people like him, who sell them as curios,” Douglas says, gesticulating his open hand in the direction of the curio stall. Yael glances toward the curio stall just as the furious stall owner stomps toward them.

From the beginning, Green does a fantastic job of exposing young adult readers to the controversy and complex issues of life in South Africa and gives them a glimpse of what Yael will be faced with during her program at Kruger.

While Green takes readers along on the journey, she writes beautiful description with a strong voice. Even if readers have never stepped foot in South Africa or any wildlife park, jungle, or forest, after reading No Entry, they will have a vivid picture of the setting. She uses all of her senses to expose readers to the sights, sounds, and smells of the places Yael lives in South Africa:

“The rain is slowing as Yael lies under her thin, cotton sheet listening to the drops hit the tin roof of the room she was meant to share with two university students, who are studying environmental filmmaking on a separate program. It turns out they’d both been delayed for a reason she didn’t catch and so far, she has the room to herself. She inhales and smells the heat rising from the ground after the downpour, insect repellant, and traces of dust. When she returns at lunch, she’ll blast the intense heat away with air conditioning.”

This book is not for the faint of heart—some of the author’s descriptions are intense, and she paints a realistic picture of what Yael experiences, while not making it too scary or mature for teenage readers. In an interview, Green said, “The truth is I believe less is more. There's no need to sensationalize the scenes. Elephant slaughter in plain language is enough. In addition, there's a sub-theme of terrorism in the novel because violence is universal. I purposely made the terrorist event happen in Canada because I want to get the message across that senseless violence doesn't just happen in Africa or the Middle East. That attitude might allow some of us to feel off the hook. It happens everywhere, and we all have to make sure we are part of the solution...”

In this excellent novel, readers will find themselves experiencing the joys and sorrows of Yael, who is just trying to recover from her recent family tragedy with an adventure in South Africa, and they will become her biggest champion, as she unravels who is behind the elephant poaching on protected land and why anyone would want to hurt such magnificient animals just for money.

To purchase No Entry as an ebook, please click here.

Margo L. Dill is a children's and young adult author, works as managing editor for WOW! Women On Writing, and teaches a new class for middle-grade and young adult writers that starts March 31, where writers receive instruction and critique! Check out the syllabus here. There are still spots left.  


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Ellen Valladares launches her tour of Crossing the Line

Monday, April 16, 2018
...and giveaway!

Laura, who died thirty years ago, enlists the help of a tenacious high school reporter named Rebecca, who is very much alive. Rebecca, although skeptical and conflicted by her supposed encounters with a spirit, determines to learn the truth about Laura’s tragic death. As the clues unravel and their worlds collide, Rebecca finds herself at a dangerous crossroads.

Laura, now pulled back into everything she left behind when she died—her old high school and memories of her life and death—has been in training for this exact moment. And nothing means more to her than succeeding at her assignment.

It is her one chance to make sure that what happened to her does not happen to anyone else, and especially not to her new friend, Rebecca.

Paperback: 296 pages
Genre: Fiction/Young Adult Novel
Publisher: WiDO (March 2018)
ISBN-10: 1937178994
ISBN-13: 978-1937178994

Crossing the Line is available for purchase in print and as an ebook at Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and IndieBound.

Book Giveaway Contest:
To win a copy of Crossing the Line, please enter using the Rafflecopter form at the bottom of this post. The giveaway contest closes Sunday, April 29th at 11:59 PM EST. We will announce the winner the same day in the Rafflecopter widget. Good luck!

About the Author:

Ellen Wolfson Valladares is an award-winning writer/author, workshop facilitator, community volunteer, and mother. A native Floridian, she grew up in St. Petersburg and graduated with a bachelor’s degree in Journalism from the University of Florida. She has worked as an editor, public relations professional, and freelance writer. Her first book, a children’s novel entitled Jonathan's Journey to Mount Miapu, received several awards, including a Mom’s Choice Gold Award and the 2009 Coalition of Visionary Resources Visionary Awards Book of the Year award. She also has a meditation CD, entitled “Healing and Manifestation with the Archangels.”
Today, Valladares continues to work as a freelance writer. She also enjoys coaching high school students working on their college essays and helping other writers realize their dreams. She has been married to her husband, Manny, for 30 years and they have two sons, Gabriel and Michael, two dogs, Flash and Chili Pepper, and a crazy cat named Zelda. They live in Weston, Fla.

Find Ellen Online:

Website: http://www.ellenvalladares.com

Twitter: @ValladaresEllen

FB: @EllenValladares444

Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/3023698.Ellen_Wolfson_Valladares

-----Interview by Crystal J. Casavant-Otto

WOW: Thank you so much for being here and thanks for choosing WOW! Women on Writing to help promote Crossing The Line.

When you first approached me, you mentioned WiDo had steered you toward WOW! - can you tell me more about how you partnered with WiDO and what that process has been like? What would you say to another author considering going this route?

Ellen: It’s really been wonderful working with WiDo Publishing. There are so many options in the publishing world today. Ten years ago, I self-published my first book, a middle grade novel, and that was a great learning process. I still had this dream of getting a publishing contract, though, so the second time around, with Crossing the Line, I set my mind on giving that my best shot. That meant first and foremost, polishing my manuscript before sending it out. I solicited feedback and rewrote it. Then I hired an independent editor and rewrote it. Got some more feedback and rewrote it. You get the picture.

That was half the battle. Then there’s researching the right publishers and agents for your work and crafting a good query letter. I will say that my membership in the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI) helped a lot with that.

The last element is the magic fairy dust because there is this intangible, indescribable piece that involves right timing, right place, right person. As a believer in the magic of the Universe, I do feel that it was no accident that I stumbled on WiDo’s website when I did. I resonated so much with their mission statement and felt my book was a perfect fit. I was at the point where I was about to give up on the publisher idea and self-publish again when WiDo expressed interest in reading the manuscript. I was so excited and the day they offered me a contract was truly a dream come true!

From there, we went into the editing process and wait for it… more rewriting. I do think that is one of the hardest things in the process – having to read your book again and again. And yet, I will tell you that my editor, Shantell Booth, was wonderful and made what could have been painful, quite painless. Having self-published before and having full control, I was a little worried about what I might be “forced” to do my story. There was none of that with WiDo, just great suggestions and guidance that improved the book. They really allowed me more freedom and creative control than I expected. I don’t think that’s the case with all publishers, so that reinforced my decision to go with WiDo.

The editing process took a bit longer than I expected, but then we got to the fun part – creating the cover. WiDo took my input and I was actually shocked that they came up with a cover I loved from the start.

What would I say to other authors wanting to take this route? This path takes persistence and patience. To increase your odds of getting a publisher, you have to put your best foot forward. Don’t send out your first draft or your second draft. Take your time, get honest feedback, professional editing if you can, and submit a well-crafted, clean manuscript. Then do your research and only send to those publishers or agents who are looking for your genre/style. And don’t forget the pixie dust. Seriously, sometimes that pixie dust is as simple as believing in yourself and not giving up.


This path takes persistence and patience.


WOW: Believing there are enough hours in the day seems to be a stumbling block for many of us. Throw a little of that pixie dust my way. But seriously...time management seems to be quite a challenge for all of us, but you're a journalist, novelist, coach, speaker, volunteer, and teacher. Oh great one, please teach us your ways? How do you balance it all and still manage to have such great hair?

Ellen: I love this question for so many reasons! First, let’s be honest. The hair does not always look like it does in the headshot. I’ve worked at home for more than 20 years and the best part is not having to worry about what you’re wearing or what your hair looks like before going to the “office.” My work attire is often shorts, t-shirt, hair pulled back, no shoes. I love it!

The other side of this question, about balance, I take very seriously, or at least I’ve learned to take more seriously over the years. First of all, I will admit that I don’t do all of those things at the same time. As a freelance journalist, you get and take assignments as they come and you can be as busy or not busy as you want. Over the last few years, as I’ve dedicated myself to writing and editing the book, I took on a little less freelance work and also did less of the volunteering and teaching.

Here’s what I really want to share. It’s so easy to get overwhelmed, especially when you have young children. I just became an empty nester so that changes everything. But my best advice about balance and managing time is to be dedicated to taking care of your own mind, body, and spirit first. I realize people will say that’s not as easy as it sounds, and I get it. I only know from my personal experience that when I’ve taken time to meditate, exercise, journal, or whatever it is you like to do for yourself, I am able to more easily handle everything and everyone that pops up in my day. On the other end of that, I know when I caught up on the crazy train of life just doing, doing, doing, I end up exhausted, stressed, and sometimes even sick. Everything goes better when you make yourself and how you feel a priority.


Be dedicated to taking care of your own mind, body, and spirit first.


One last truth on this: it took years to complete each of the books I’ve written. Maybe that’s because there were other things vying for my attention at times, or maybe it was just procrastination. Or maybe I also took time to enjoy life and my boys while they were still here. It’s all good any which way. I like to compare it to my attempts at running/jogging. I may not be the fastest (I’m very slow!), but I keep going, pace myself, and still manage to make it to the finish line all the same.

WOW: Such great advice - thank you so much for giving us a glimpse into your life. Let's take that a step further: What does your writing space look like? What advice would you give others who may be needing some help with creating a creative space?

Ellen: This is another fun one. Part of me says, yikes, don’t answer this. That’s the part that doesn’t want you see my “creative mess.” Aren’t all creative people a little messy? So yes, there are some piles and messy stacks that need to be gone through, but there is also some fun, inspiring stuff, so let’s focus on that.

I do have a room in my home that is my “office” for writing. I love nature, so I made sure my desk and computer are situated so that I can look out my window and see the canal and trees in our backyard. Today lots of dragonflies are buzzing around and I saw a few ibises and a hawk who stopped for a rest in one of the trees. Zelda, our cat, also loves to come to the window and pounce on the lizards that taunt her from the other side of the glass.

Inside, I’m surrounded by my favorite things: shelves of books, artwork and writings from my kids, photos of my kids and family, stacks of journals (completed and ongoing), lots of angel figurines, crystals, angel card decks, special cards/gifts from my husband and friends, awards for my first book, and pictures and words that inspire me. A little peek into some of the current things I’ve chosen to put in front of me at the moment: the bottom portion of a card with a quote from author Paulo Coelho (one of my favorites) that reads, “Just as you are transforming your own life, may you transform the lives of those around you.”; two cut-outs from a magazine that say “Own it!” and “Dream Big”; and the Playbill from Hamilton, which I saw with my son Michael about a year ago and is a treasured memory.

So I think you get my idea of a creative space. It should be a space that feels wonderful, inviting, and inspirational to you. And even though I joked about the messy creatives, cleaning up those piles and clearing out old stuff every once in a while, does wonders for getting the creativity flowing. If you ever feel stuck, clean!


If you ever feel stuck, clean!


WOW: There have been so many take-aways in this interview so far. I know our readers really appreciate how open and honest you are. Being honest with other is one thing, but how honest are you with yourself? What advice would your current self give to your younger self when it comes to writing? life? publishing?

Ellen: On writing, life, and publishing – Don’t take yourself too seriously. Have fun. Enjoy the process. You don’t have to be perfect. Everything always works out okay.

I want to add that I started to answer this question in reverse, and I think that’s important when it comes to the writing part, especially since I loved to write from a very early age. So, my younger self would like to tell my current self to always remember what you loved about writing, how you did it for fun, just because, and it didn’t matter what anyone thought about it.

WOW: I love how you spun that last question. Maybe it's our younger selves that have all the wisdom!

I'll have to ask that question both ways in the future. Thank you!

One last question before we head into this exciting tour of Crossing The Line. Do you belong to any book clubs or writers clubs? Why or why not?

Ellen: I have belonged to a book club for about eight years. On top of the great camaraderie and delicious food and wine, I’ve enjoyed reading books that I might have not otherwise chosen on my own to my read. They say to be a great writer you have to read a lot and being part of the book club has probably gotten me to read more and helped me explore different kinds of writing styles. It’s also interesting from a writer’s point of view to hear my friends’ reactions to different authors’ approaches. It’s certainly helped me realize that opinions on books are incredibly subjective.

As mentioned earlier, I am member of SCBWI. I’ve also been a longtime member of the Florida Authors and Publishers Association (FAPA). It’s so important, especially for us lone wolf writers, to get out and mingle with other writers. I’ve learned so much and have gotten so inspired by being in the company of other aspiring writers and successful authors.


It’s so important, especially for us lone wolf writers, to get out and mingle with other writers.


WOW: Thank you again Ellen. This is an interview I hope all our readers have an opportunity to read at least once. Your Tweet Tour has been a blast and I can't wait to hear from all the reviewers in the upcoming weeks! You've been a joy to interview and work with. Thank you!

----------Blog Tour Dates

Monday, April 16th @ The Muffin
Join us at the Muffin for an author interview and book giveaway for the fictional young adult novel by Ellen Valladares, Crossing the Line.
http://muffin.wow-womenonwriting.com/

Tuesday, April 17th @ World of My Imagination
Nicole Pyles reads and reviews Crossing the Line by Ellen Valladares. This is a fun young adult novel that readers will be sure to delight in!
http://theworldofmyimagination.blogspot.com/

Wednesday, April 18th @ Beverley Baird
Beverley Baird reviews Crossing the Line by Ellen Valladares. Readers won't want to miss this fast paced young adult novel!
https://beverleyabaird.wordpress.com/

Thursday, April 19th @ Memoir Writer’s Journey
Ellen Valladares pens today's guest post at Kathleen Pooler's Memoir Writer's Journey. Don't miss this great post titled "Your Writer's Purpose -- how creating your purpose/vision can keep you on target" and learn more about Valladares latest novel Crossing the Line.
https://krpooler.com/

Thursday, April 19th @ Write Like Crazy
Mary Jo reads Ellen Valladares Crossing the Line and shares her thoughts with readers at Write Like Crazy.
https://writelikecrazy.com

Friday, April 20th @ BookWorm
Anjanette Potter delights readers at Bookworm with her review of the YA Novel Crossing the Line by Ellen Valladares.
https://bookworm66.wordpress.com/

Saturday, April 21st @ Spark the Wizard
Brandi at Spark the Wizard shares her thoughts in a review of Ellen Valladares novel Crossing the Line.
http://sparkthewizarduprising.com/

Monday, April 23rd @ Bring on Lemons with Cathy Hansen
Wisconsin entrepreneur and school teacher reviews the latest novel by Ellen Valladares. Don't miss this opportunity to find out more about the YA Novel Crossing the Line.
http://bringonlemons.blogspot.com/

Tuesday, April 24th @ Finished Pages
Today, at Finished Pages, readers have an opportunity to learn more about Crossing the Line the latest novel by Ellen Valladares. Don't miss Renee's review of this YA Novel!
http://finishedpages.com/


Thursday, April 26th @ Digging with the Worms
Eric Trant reviews the latest novel by Ellen Valladares. See what Eric thinks of Crossing the Line and find out more about this great book and accomplished author.
http://diggingwiththeworms.blogspot.com/

Thursday, April 26th @ Phy Tallic
Phy reviews the delightful YA Novel Crossing the Line by Ellen Valladares.
https://phytallic.wordpress.com/

Friday, April 27th @ Write Happy
Today at Write Happy, Catherine Brown will be interviewing Ellen Valladares about her latest novel Crossing the Line. Don't miss this opportunity to learn more about this YA Novel as well as hear some tips from the accomplished journalist and author Ellen Valladares.
https://www.writehappy.net/blog

Monday, April 30th @ Ellen Valladares
Crystal J. Casavant-Otto from WOW! Women on Writing reviews Crossing the Line by Ellen Valladares and shares her thoughts with readers at Valladares blog.
http://ellenvalladares.com/ellens-blog/

Tuesday, May 1st @ I Just Want to Finish My…
Brittany shares her thoughts after reading Crossing the Line by Ellen Valladares. Don't miss this insightful blog stop for this delightful Young Adult Novel!
http://www.ijustwannafinishmy.com/

Wednesday, May 2nd @ Hott Books
Don't miss today's guest post at Hott Books! Distinguished author Ellen Valladares shares her post titled: 'The Inspiration Behind Crossing the Line'. You'll want to learn more about this delightful YA Novel!
http://www.hottbooks.com/

Friday, May 4th @ Frasers Fun House
Melanie at Frasers Fun House reviews Crossing the Line by Ellen Valladares.
https://frasersfunhouse.com/

Monday, May 7th @ Word Nerd Media
Elizabeth at Word Nerd reviews the latest novel by Ellen Valladares. You won't want to miss a minute of this captivating YA Novel Crossing the Line.
https://www.wordnerdmedia.com/

Friday, May 11th @ BookWorm
Anjanette Potter reviews Crossing the Line by Ellen Valladares and shares her thoughts with readers at BookWorm!
https://bookworm66.wordpress.com/

Monday, May 14th @ Bring on Lemons with Elizabeth Hansen
Young reader Elizabeth shares her thoughts about this intriguing tale.
http://bringonlemons.blogspot.com/


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Talent by B. Lynn Goodwin Blog Tour Launch and Book Giveaway

Monday, February 29, 2016
The life of your average teenager is filled with drama both big and small. But put a teenager in the school drama club, surrounded by other teenagers who live to perform, and the drama quotient will go through the roof. Life will be filled with everything from the seemingly trivial (but absolutely vital) issue of stepping on each other’s lines to the more far reaching problems that accompany alcohol abuse, death and relationships.

In Talent, fifteen-and-half-year-old Sandee Mason has a hard enough time dealing with auditioning for the school musical, getting her driver's license, and surviving Algebra. But she has to deal with a host of more adult problems all stemming from the disappearance of her big brother Bri while in Afghanistan.

She discovers that real life doesn’t have a script as she deals with loss, the manipulation of Bri’s best friend, her burning ambition to find her talent and the mystery of what happened to Bri.

Paperback: 284 pages  (also available in e-format)
Publisher: Eternal Press (November 1, 2015)   
ISBN-10:  1629293350
ISBN-13: 978-1629293356
Twitter hashtag: #TalentYA

Talent is available as a print and e-book at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and IndieBound.

Book Giveaway Contest:

To win a copy of Talent, please enter using the Rafflecopter form at the bottom of this post. The giveaway contest closes this Monday, March 7 at 12:00 AM EST. We will announce the winner the same day in the Rafflecopter widget. Good luck!

About the Author:

B. Lynn Goodwin is the owner of Writer Advice and the author of You Want Me to Do WHAT? Journaling for Caregivers. She’s been published in local and regional newspapers, plus numerous magazines, anthologies, and online journals. A former drama and English teacher, she now conducts writing workshops, writes book reviews, edits, coaches writers, and is currently working on a second book about Sandee Mason’s adventures and a memoir about getting married for the first time at age 62 to a two-time widower who she met on…gulp…Craigslist. She lives with her husband, Richard, and her dog, Eddie McPuppers, in Northern California.

B. Lynn Goodwin’s websites:

-----Interview by Jodi Webb  

WOW: In the past, your writing has been on the non-fiction side of the library--writing how-to, memoir. What made you decide to plunge into fiction?

LYNN: I had several stories to tell, and the best way to do it was to combine what I knew and what I was exploring in a work of fiction. In 1979 I directed the musical Oklahoma! at San Ramon High. All of the characters in TALENT are fictitious, but I remember feeling like I could read the minds of kids who knew they were not going to get chosen for a part but wanted to find their talent and some recognition for it. My fiction has roots in reality. No dystopian fantasy monsters or zombies here.

WOW: So many of characters started out in a series of short stories? What made you decide to take the stories to the next level and write them in a novel? Or were the short stories “test runs” for the novel you were planning?

LYNN: The articles for Dramatics were well received. I liked the characters and wanted to keep telling their stories. I had wonderful memories of directing Oklahoma! a few years earlier, so this seemed like the logical next step.

WOW: Tell us more about your work as an educator. What lessons did you learn from your days as an educator that helped you as a writer?

LYNN: I taught English and drama in high school and college. I learned to value teens, especially my students who wanted to succeed. I learned that teens are eager to embrace the world, that sometimes they are scared, but other times they are full of life, love, gratitude, and energy—crying out to be harnessed. I never thought of my young actors as students. I thought of them as actors, and I gave them the respect that eludes so many teens.

WOW: As fiction writers, it's difficult enough creating realistic characters--but you had to tackle that tough subject: teenagers. Do you find teenager characters more difficult to write than adult characters?

LYNN: I spent nearly 20 years teaching high school and college students. I knew my teenage actors very well. I still carry them with me in my head. These characters were easy to write. Some of them had already appeared in a series in Dramatics Magazine. I wanted their stories out in the world.

WOW: Did you do any special research before creating your characters for Talent to ensure that they felt real and timely? Some writers have confessed to eavesdropping at the mall!

LYNN: I did my research years ago. I wrote the first draft on an Apple IIC in the mid-eighties. It’s come a long way. Since I was in high school, I’ve understood that all teens want recognition, acknowledgement, respect, and most want freedom from the rules of Mom and Dad. These kids are on that road. I am rooting for them.

Teens have many of the same goals as adults, but they have less life experience. I knew what they wanted, what they would do to get it, and who/what was in their way, so I don’t remember finding this difficult. If I did, though, I’d go into my journal, write “Sandee, what’s going on? You can tell me,” let her answer, and keep going.

WOW: When you were writing Talent did you have any young adult beta-readers or "experts" to help you make sure your characters rang true?

LYNN: Emily, one of my granddaughters (you have no idea how thrilled I am every time I write that—I got married for the first time four years ago to a two-time widower with seven adult children) was my teenage beta reader. She said it was good and she put a review on Amazon. She reads constantly and loves Harry Potter. Her cousin, Haleigh, got a copy after the book came out. I’m not sure she’s found time to read it yet.

WOW: Do you have any advice for aspiring YA writers?

LYNN: Whether you’re writing contemporary, realistic, fantasy, sci fi, or dystopian, be true to your characters. Make their goals real.

If you don’t know what teens want, talk to them. You’ll find them in any Starbuck’s near a high school. You’ll find them in line at the DMV. You’ll find some in the library, some on the sports field, and some seeking work. Read Teen Ink. Volunteer in a school. Looking for the bad guys? Volunteer at your local juvenile hall.

Let your characters and their environment guide the action. Never put their parents or teachers in charge.

Of course it goes without saying that you should read YA. Also, try journaling in the voice of your characters. It’s a great way to get in their heads. Need an example? Sandee Mason, my protagonist, has written many of the blog posts at http://blynngoodwin.com.

WOW: What's up next for you?

LYNN: Right now I’m working on a memoir about getting married for the first time at 62 to a 2-time widower that I met on … gulp … Craigslist. I’m also thinking about my next Sandee story. I think it will start at the DMV on the day that she goes to get her license.

I’m teaching Independent Study in Writing through Story CircleNetwork I’m scheduled to present a workshop at the Story Circle Network Conference in April and a salon about the powers of journaling at the International Women Writer’s Guild in July. Four times a year I produce a new issue of Writer Advice, and I’m reading and responding to all submissions for our four contests this year.

In my spare time, I read for book reviews; walk Eddie McPuppers, who is our dog-dog and a columnist for a Petfinder Newsletter; and spend time with the man I married 4 years ago. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to share my thoughts with the readers of this Muffin interview. This has been a great experience.

WOW: Hang on, Lynn because the experience is just beginning. After all this is just the first stop on your WOW Blog Tour. Enjoy the tour everyone!

----------Blog Tour Dates 

Monday, February 29(today!) @ The Muffin
Stop by for an interview with B. Lynn Goodwin and a chance to win Talent!

Wednesday, March 2 @ Building Bookshelves
Read a review of B. Lynn Goodwin's YA novel Talent about all the drama in high school and enter to win a copy.

Friday, March 4 @ All Things Audry
Author B. Lynn Goodwin shares tips for discovering your hidden talents.

Tuesday, March 8 @ Just Commonly
B. Lynn Goodwin, author of the YA novel Talent, shares five ways to cope with loss and the opportunity to win a copy of Talent!

Thursday, March 10 @ Lisa’s Reviews and Interviews
Wonder what makes writers tick? Learn more about author B. Lynn Goodwin in today's interview.

Friday, March 11 @ Books & Such
Author B. Lynn Goodwin will be sharing ways to make your writing shine -- and we all want shiny writing! Enter to win a copy of her latest book: the YA novel Talent.

Tuesday, March 15 @ Adan Ramie 
B. Lynn Goodwin, author of the YA novel Talent, stops by today with a guest post. Don't miss it!

Wednesday, March 16 @ Finished Pages
Author B. Lynn Goodwin, author of the YA novel Talent, shares some acting techniques to help you create three dimensional characters. Action!

Friday, March 18 @ The New Book Review
Don't miss today's review of B. Lynn Goodwin's debut YA novel, Talent.

Wednesday, March 23 @ Deal Sharing Aunt
Learn more about author B. Lynn Goodwin in today's interview and read a review of her YA novel Talent.

Friday, March 25 @ The Things You Can Read
B. Lynn Goodwin's tour for her debut YA novel, Talent, is coming to a close. Don't miss today's review.

Sunday, March 27 @ Writer Unboxed
B. Lynn Goodwin, author of the Young Adult novel Talent shares "5 Ways to Tap into Universal Truths about Young Adults".

To view all our touring authors, check out our Events Calendar. Keep up with blog stops and giveaways in real time by following us on Twitter @WOWBlogTour.

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If you have a website or blog and would like to host one of our touring  authors or schedule a tour of your own, please email us at blogtour@wow-womenonwriting.com.

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Forever Young Adult Readers Under Attack

Monday, June 09, 2014
So I write Young Adult. I read YA. I also read romance, mystery, literary fiction, nonfiction, picture books, board books, the newspaper, blogs, and middle-grade novels. But right now, YA readers over the age of 18 are under attack by a blogger named Ruth Graham who wrote a post called AGAINST YA on the Slate Book Review. Her tagline reads, "Read whatever you want. But you should feel embarrassed when what you're reading was written for children."

You might have seen this article or heard about it. It's been circulating around Facebook and Twitter, and it has several readers and writers steaming mad! I think the part that is so objective, of course, is the word embarrassed. I'm thinking adults should be embarrassed over much more serious things, such as our infiltration of Facebook, than reading Fault in Our Stars or standing in line for the midnight showing of Twilight. But what do I know? I read YA.

Since I am a YA and MG novelist, I think Graham gives me a pass because I have to read what I write. But still her article really ticks me off. I have had a lot of adults tell me they read my latest novel, a YA titled Caught Between Two Curses, in one day. Should they be embarrassed about this? Should they be hiding their book behind a black piece of construction paper or wearing big sunglasses when reading it on Kindle? Or should I just be happy that of the friends I know who love to read a lot of different genres and types of books, they took the time to read mine? I'll let you know. . .I'm happy.

I've loved children's books since I was young and I've never stopped. My VERY FAVORITE BOOK SERIES EVER is Harry Potter. I haven't read any adult novel that has made me want to read it three times as all 7 of HP have. So, call me stupid. Call me immature. According to Graham, I'm missing out on great literature that will really make me think and stay with me long after I shut the book. ( Full confession: My mom, in her seventies, and I still mourn the end of the TV series, Angel.)

Here's the deal. Has Graham ever been to a Star Trek convention? Has she seen people dress up and act out The Rocky Horror Picture Show? Should these people be embarrassed to dress up as creatures and characters who aren't even real? What does she think about romance readers who visit the fictional landmarks in their favorite books? I mean, she has opened up a (excuse the cliche) can of worms here.

So, I'm curious. What do you think? Do you read YA? Do you read MG? If you do, do you do this because you like it, because you write for the age, because you have kids/grandkids that age? Do you think it matters what you choose to read as long as you are reading and enjoying it?

I just think Graham entered dangerous territory when she started judging what other people read. It's like banning books. You don't have to ban them to stop YOUR children from reading them, just don't let those books in your house. If Graham doesn't want to read YA, then fine. But she doesn't have to insult the people who do--no matter how old they are.

Not only is Margo L. Dill a young adult writer and reader, she also teaches a novel writing course for people who want to write for the young adult or children's market! Find out all the classes Margo teaches and upcoming dates on the WOW! classroom page here.

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Coming Up with A Marketing Plan that Makes Sense

Sunday, April 13, 2014
I am in the throes of marketing my new YA book, Caught Between Two Curses. This is my second book; and this time, I'm trying to do everything right, learn from my mistakes with marketing Finding My Place, and continue to do what works well. Here are some areas I'm trying to think about with my second book to help me market and sell it.

  1. Where does my audience hang out? My audience is teenagers and adults that like to read YA. Online, these two groups of people hang out on different social media sites--Facebook, Twitter, Pinterest, Tumblr, Instagram--visit well-kept-up blogs, and read their email. 
  2. How can I reach libraries? Librarians can really be your friend--how can I get this group's attention?
  3. How can I get reviews from my target audience? I've started giving teenagers free copies in order for an exchange of a review. I want honest reviews, but I am providing a copy. 
  4. What physical events can I do to get in front of teens? Do they go to library events or book store signings? Or is this a waste of my time? Maybe I can serve on a panel with more popular YA authors or create a writing workshop for teens who want an outlet.
  5. There are a lot of YA "reader" blogs--I can do a blog tour on these blogs to let readers know about my book. 
I am just now trying to figure all this out, but I do have an actual teenager in my critique group. I decided to ask her some questions about marketing to teens, and she gave me some great insights. I can't wait to implement her ideas. Because the fact is that if you are not actively marketing yourself, you will not sell many copies of your book. The other fact is that romance writers should not market the same way as nonfiction writers or mystery writers or children's writers. Our audiences are different, and so should our plans be different.

So, if you have a book out, do you have a marketing plan? What's on it?
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Handling Description Through Your Point of View Character

Wednesday, January 29, 2014
When I edit and teach other writers, one common mistake I find (and in my own writing too) is changing point of view characters without realizing it or meaning to. This happens more often when someone is writing in third person limited and accidentally leaps into the mind of the non-POV character. But there are already tons of posts on this subject and how to fix it. So, hopefully you continued reading this brilliant introduction to get to the meat of what this point of view post is about:

Handling Description Through Your POV's Character's Eyes

I'm going to specifically target children's writers, but this really applies to any writer for any genre. If you pick one POV character, which most of us do in a section or chapter anyway, all the description of the setting, the other characters, and the events have to be through the POV character's eyes. 

Here's an example:

Let's say you are writing a middle-grade mystery novel (like I am) about an 11-year-old boy who is at his grandma's house for a family reunion in the summer. BEFORE writing a single word of description about the setting, you have to think to yourself: What is an 11-year-old boy going to notice about grandma's house that the reader needs to know to understand the setting/plot/conflict? 

Bad example: 

Patrick saw his grandma's rose bushes growing alongside the freshly painted white farmhouse and wondered when the three-legged race would start, so he could beat his sister and her 12-year-old friend, Nicole. He waited by the ancient, towering oak tree, while wiping sweat off his brow from the sweltering heat. 

I say that is a bad example because although it gives you some details about the setting (grandma's yard in the summer), events (three-legged race), and characters (his sister and her friend), this description uses language that doesn't sound like an 11-year-old boy or focus on things Patrick would notice. The word choice is off.

Try this instead:

Patrick trampled through his grandma's garden, careful not to touch the huge rose bushes he fell in last summer. He got a drink from the hose in the front yard and noticed a wet paint sign hanging on the house. His grandpa was so funny! Looking for shade, he hurried under the tall oak tree, while he waited for all the slow pokes in his family to get outside for the three-legged race. Sweat dripped into his eyes, and he blinked as he thought about beating his dumb sister and her friend in the race.

If your main character is a 16-year-old rich, city girl and she is put in a rural area by her parents for the summer, what is she going to notice and how would she describe it? Would this be different than a character who was 8 and had grown up on a farm? Yes--the age and life experience change word choice, what the character notices, and how he or she notices it.

If you are a wordsmith and you are writing children's or YA novels, be careful. As adults, we have a tendency to use words WE would use to describe something. But to hold your readers' interest, your character has to do the describing--not just the talking and the thinking. 

Margo L. Dill teaches novel writing and children's writing classes for WOW! On Thursday, January 30, a session of Writing a Children's and YA Novel begins (online class); and on February 7, Writing a Novel with a Writing Coach begins. She is the author of Finding My Place (middle-grade historical fiction, 2012) and the upcoming young adult novel, Caught Between Two Curses, due out in March 2014 from Rocking Horse Publishing. 

 photo above by mRio http://www.flickr.com 
 
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