Showing posts with label This is Us. Show all posts
Showing posts with label This is Us. Show all posts

The Case for Powerful Flashbacks

Wednesday, December 13, 2017
There seems to be a trend lately--with storytelling in movies, television shows, and books--to use flashbacks to deepen the plot. It's not a new literary device--that's for sure. But I remember going to conferences, when I first started seriously writing about 18 years ago, and speakers talked about using flashbacks at a minimum and only when absolutely necessary.

Now look at the popularity of the television show, This Is Us, and all the critical acclaim those writers are receiving--and it's well-deserved. The show is half flashbacks, at least. I am also reading a book, What Alice Forgot, about a woman who bumps her head and forgets 10 years of her life. But throughout the book, the author, Liane Moriarty, uses flashbacks, which are even earlier than the 10 years she forgot, to reveal what Alice's life was like as child and as a young adult. Trends come and go--multiple viewpoints were popular for a while as well as using present tense to tell a story--and I'm sure you can think of many more. I mean, that's a trend--it comes and goes, but I love this flashback one!

My writing group members recently had a discussion about revealing crucial information to the "present-day" plot in a flashback. During this discussion, I thought about this novel draft I had been writing and having trouble with--I had felt stuck and like it was the most terrible manuscript I had ever written--and then I thought, WAIT! I could start in the "present" and flashback, instead of trying to tell a linear story.

Would This Is Us be as popular if it wasn't for the elaborate and clever flashbacks?  No. Would I be out of my writing funk with this novel if it wasn't for the possibility of using a flashback? No. But here's the funny thing. When I googled some information about flashbacks for this post, I came upon this post on author Jennifer Scolluar's website , and one of the first lines is exactly what I was mentioning above. Her writing mentor, Sydney Smith, writes, "A fellow writer told me recently there is a hard and fast rule that prohibits writers from using flashbacks. That was news to me!" Apparently, Sydney hadn't been at the same writing conferences as me back in the early 2000s, but at least I had confirmation that I didn't make that up about authors who shun flashbacks.

Sydney goes on to say, "Think of Wuthering Heights – Nellie Dean tells Mr Lawrence the history of Catherine Earnshaw and Heathcliff. Through her diary, Catherine tells Mr Lawrence more about her relationship with Heathcliff and why he went away. So much of the novel is told in flashbacks of one sort or another that if you take them out, almost nothing would be left." Right? The same is true for This is Us.

So all this thinking about and enjoying flashbacks made me draw a couple conclusions:

1. If you are going to use a flashback, you need a good reason--it is the best way to tell this story, to reveal character traits, to work in the crucial backstory.

2. The anti-flashback movement is similar to the anti-prologue movement or the anti-anthropomorphic advice for picture book writers. Somehow, a few people decided these were no good and got others to jump on the bandwagon. But if your story needs these literary devices and you can write them well, then go for it.

What about you...do you use flashbacks in your fiction? Do you enjoy stories with flashbacks? 


Margo L. Dill is a writer, editor, and teacher, living in St. Louis, MO. She teaches a novel course for WOW! each month, which includes 4 critiques of your work-in-progress. To check out more about her, go to http://www.margoldill.com. To check out her next class starting January 5, go to the WOW! classroom. 

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How Many "Almosts" Do You Want to Rack Up?

Sunday, May 07, 2017
I was watching This is Us, a show I resisted until a couple of months ago... and then I got hooked.

On this particular episode, a character was dying. They said, "My life has been full of almosts and would-haves," and I immediately thought of all the things I hesitate doing. The projects I shove aside because of the bucket-load of excuses I fabricate.

I have a manuscript that I've worked on for years, and it's still a hot mess. I keep putting blinders on when it comes to the work it probably needs.

I have a manuscript that's almost finished--at least the second draft is almost finished. This WIP is a project that's more marketable, more appealing and more easy-to-get than anything I've ever written (at least I think so)... and yet it still sits there, unfinished.

Am I the same as other writers? Are there some main reasons why we make sure we live in the Land of Almost and the continent of Would-Have? It doesn't help matters that I'm the Princess of Procrastination.



If you'd like to embrace your procrastinating ways, check out this article which outlines how putting things off is a natural part of the writing process.

Another article suggests we examine how we procrastinate, and offers some tips on how to keep our putting things off in check.



I've been reading Julia Cameron's The Right to Write. She has a short chapter on procrastination (all the chapters are short) and in it she says:

"A primary reason writers procrastinate is in order to build up a sense of deadline. Deadlines create a flow of adrenaline. Adrenaline medicates and overwhelms the censor. Writers procrastinate so that when they finally get to writing, they can get past the censor."



That really makes sense to me. Maybe I'll work on not procrastinating so much...

... Later.

What do you do when you procrastinate? And if you have any up your sleeve, what tricks or strategies have you found that work to vanquish procrastination?


Sioux Roslawski hopes to finally finish her WIP. She's giving herself until the end of May, she's going public with that goal, and her students and their possible disappointment will (hopefully) keep her driven. Sioux's also gearing up for her son's wedding at the end of the month. If you want to read more about her journey as a writer, read her posts.
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