Showing posts with label Cher'ley Grogg. Show all posts
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Queen of Multitasking

Sunday, May 01, 2011



I'm writing this article, watching TV, talking on the phone and drinking my coffee. I've always done more than one thing at a time. I believe myself to be the Queen of Multitasking. In fact, it's hard for me to only do individual tasks. Just the other day I was scanning the aisles of Walmart, reading my shopping list and talking on the phone. To my friend I said, "Lettuce." She asked, "Let us what?"
People can't multitask very well, and when people say they can, they're deluding themselves," said neuroscientist Earl Miller. He said, "The brain is very good at deluding itself.
You're not paying attention to one or two things simultaneously, but switching between them very rapidly."
At a lab at the University of Michigan, researchers are using an MRI scanner to photograph test subjects' brains as they perform different tasks. Two red items were shown to the man, so his brain searched for which one was larger. Then the subject was shown a green item; the brain had to decide which item was more important. The MRI showed the brain pausing before responding. It had to store information about the red item and search for what information it had stored about green items before deciding to focus on the green. 


           Miller says, "Part of the brain that does this is called the "executive system." It's a bit like one of those cartoon conductors telling the orchestra: louder, softer, faster, slower. You come in here. You be quiet for a few measures."  
   


  Peter Bregman tells about a study which showed that people distracted by incoming email and phone calls saw a 10-point fall in their IQs. What's the impact of a 10-point drop? The same as losing a night of sleep. More than twice the effect of smoking marijuana.
Doing several things at once is a trick we play on ourselves, thinking we're getting more done. In reality, multitasking slows our productivity down by as much as 40%. We don't actually multitask. We switch-task, rapidly shifting from one thing to another, interrupting ourselves unproductively, and losing time in the process.
We need to learn to do one thing at a time. Otherwise, we are putting too much stress on our brains, and this keeps us from concentrating on what we are doing. If we devote more energy to doing the single task at hand, we will have more energy to finish that task. 
How not to multitask is a difficult task. Realization that you need to channel your focus is your beginning. It is better to set aside small chunks of time to work on a task then  to do several things at one time and not finishing any of them in a timely or efficient fashion.


Some multitasking is inevitable:
  • Bouncing baby on your hip as you fix dinner.
  • Yelling at kids while driving.
  • Playing fetch with Fido while reading a novel.
  • Tending to Farmville while talking (texting) on the phone. 
Multitasking is not thinking of one thing and doing another. My mind works out many plot problems while I'm sweeping the living room. Multitasking is doing one thing and then switching, to another task and then coming back to the first. 
To finish this blog, I turned off the TV and hung up the phone. I finished it in half the time it normally takes me to write a blog. I am less stressed—okay, I am still somewhat stressed—over the tasks that I need to accomplish before the day ends, but I feel good about my accomplishments so far today.
What multitasking chores do you do at the same time? How does this effect your writing? Would you have less stress if you concentrated on only one at a time?


Resources:
Photo Queen:  http://www.librarising.com
Photo Conductor: http://www.thestarpress.com

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Layers in Life and Writing

Sunday, April 03, 2011



While looking through Facebook photos, I noticed the different hairstyles of my friends. Hairstyles have certainly changed over the years; my all time favorite—the layered cut. The "Shag", the long shag, the short shag, it didn't matter as long as there were lots of layers. I like layers.




Cakes come in layers and we layer clothes. Make-up (which I don't care much for) is layered and bricks,to build a nice house, are layered. My life is multi-layered and yours is too. 

Characters in a novel or even a short story need to be multi- layered. 

Think about the character in the book you're reading or in the one you're writing, how many layers does the character have? What are the obstacles? How many are from the present and how many are from the past? If your character only exposes one layer, how interesting does that make her? 


Here's a check list:
  1. What overall problem needs to solving?
  2. What additional problem can be added (key word additional)?
  3. And what additional problem can be added? 
Problems, problems and more problems make layers. The main character should have, at the very least, three problems. In my WIP (work in progress), Jill is an FBI agent trying to catch a serial killer, she's dealing with the multiple shootings she's been involved in, struggling with the fact that she doesn't have children and that she's attracted to her partner. Like all of us, she has much, more than that going on in her life, but that gives you an idea of the kinds of problems one character should have. 

Jill's partner, Jack has his own set of problems that build up the layers of his character. He's twice-divorced, has a 5 year old daughter who he's trying to get custody of, he can't keep partners or a steady relationship. He never had a little sister, so he tries to make Jill his sister. He's trying to catch a serial killer. 

Problems and conflict are synonymous when it comes to your characters life. 

Joy Cagil, in comparing writing a novel to screen writing, says, "Creating a conflict inside the story begins with setting up a motivation. The question to ask here is what does the character want the most? Motivation is important because it makes the audience identify with the character. This doesn't mean that the character has to be goody two shoes, but what he wants the most--be it to blow off the planet--has to be of interest to the reader or the viewer. When the viewer's curiosity is aroused, he'll stay with the story to see if the character will succeed in his quest.

The screenwriter likes to "create a platform" so he can push forward the motivation of the character. This means creating a scene or a sequence of scenes that state the point of the story clearly, so the audience or readers can penetrate inside the character. At this stage, the character's touch-up characteristics or his shades may be developed that were left out in the initial planning of the story."



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The Words Jump From the Page

Saturday, March 12, 2011

The wag of the dog's tail said, "Good times are coming." I knew what she meant because she dropped her favorite ball beside her leash.

Metaphors and similes are confusing enough but when you add personification to the mix, it gets really complicated.

The photo of the dog shows personification, which is when you make a thing, idea, or an animal do something only humans can do.

Do you want words that will literally jump from the page? Then add personification, but first you need to understand what personification is. I found this great explanation posted by Cariopea in the Using English forum, which helps explain the differences between metaphors, similes and personifications.
  1. Within the word personification, there's the word 'person'. If what you are describing has the attributes of a person, then you're using personification.
  2. The difference between personification and metaphor is that metaphor is a comparison made by referring to one thing as another.
  3. If we add in the word "like", we get a simile. Note the letters 'simil-', it means, similar. When you are comparing two things that are not 100% the same, but that have a degree of similarity, then it's a simile.




Example:
Life is not a beach, but it's like a beach. (Simile)
Life is a beach. They are the same. (Metaphor)

The beach lives. (Personification)




Word Magic for Writers devotes chapter seven to "Making Images Live". I was introduced to a talented children's writer by the name of Jerry Spinelli where in Maniac Magee he writes of a cold boy. January slipped an icy finger under his collar and down his neck. Here's another example from Mr. Spinelli's writings. During the night, March doubled back and grabbed April by the scruff of the neck and flung it another week or two down the road. Wow, to me this is powerful writing.

The lessons suggest making months human. Jerry Spinelli made March and April enemies, so how could we make two months friends.

Here's my shot at it:
December expresses her love of November by wearing the white dress November chose for her.

You try it, and post your answer here so we can all enjoy it.


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Keeping Secrets or Not

Saturday, February 26, 2011



This week my study focus is on ultimate stakes. Here's a clip from Donald Maas' Writing the Breakout Novel Workbook exploring the ultimate stakes. 



The first draft of my latest novel Mirror, Mirror—Who's the Next to Die is completed and has been for some time, so I've started the hard work of the second draft. I want to make my main character as three-dimensional as possible so I'm asking questions—why does she get up in the morning. Why does she do the things she does?  What motivates her? I thought I knew, but as I started asking questions (interviewing her), I found out I didn't. I want to find the perfect combination for her. Enough conflict in her life to make her interesting and enough strength in her life to make me want to be like her.

Another book I've been delving into is Conflict, Action and Suspense by William Noble and on page 98, he talks about Terrible Secrets.  Do you have a terrible secret? Most of us do. Mr. Noble asks how many of us would be comfortable telling about our secrets. If you would not be, then it's a terrible secret or one worth writing about.  I'm not telling mine, but I'm trying to come up with a terrible secret for my character, Jill McKeel, to live with. I haven't figured it out yet.

Does anyone remember the show I've Got a Secret? I found it interesting to follow the clues in order to guess the secret. I believe the same concept is why many readers keep turning the page. They want to put the clues together to reveal the secret.

How well do you know what motivates your character? How well do you know what motivates you? Have you ever thought about it? I'm thinking about it right now. What motivates me? 

Does your writing reveal secrets? Even, many recipes are of greater interest because they have a secret ingredient. It's time for a confession (true or not). Share your thoughts about secrets that motivate.

A couple of other Muffin Blogs that speaks of characters are:
Elizabeth King Humphrey's "Introducing Your Characters"
Another of Mine (Cher'ley Grogg) "Making Your Characters a Character"

Books photo Cher'ley Grogg
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Making Your Characters a Character

Sunday, February 13, 2011


Monk is one of my all time favorite characters. Two more characters that rank high on my list are Columbo and Matlock. They have character—big, big character. Brilliance disguised by bungling ineptness. I enjoyed Columbo and Matlock, but poor Monk had the most to overcome. I held my breath for him, I cried for him, I cheered for him.

To develop characters similar to these three start with a visual clue. They possess something that makes them vulnerable or inept when first met. Monk can't shake hands and shows his fears; Columbo has an unkempt look and appears clueless; and Matlock has a loud, southern drawl and a back-woodsy personality. The villains easily underestimate them.

This trio has a common trait; an inner intuition and a way of putting facts together to support their suspicions. As writers, it's our responsibility to portray a uniqueness about our characters. Find a trait that will enhance your character, yet distinguish them from other protagonists.

Developing a character is not easy to do. Learn your character inside out. Learn her fears. Learn her loves. What makes him tick and what ticks him off. What was their third grade teacher's name and how did they feel about her? Most of all the characters have to become Characters and in order to do that, their personalities have to be established.

Their personalities need to be likable if they are the hero and unlikable or flawed if they are the bad guy.

I found this website, the Enneagram Institute; it has some basic information on personality types. Here's an Enneagram chart revealing the 9 basic personalities.



From the chart, these one-word descriptors can be expanded into four-word sets of traits. Keep in mind that these are merely highlights and do not represent the full spectrum of each type.
  • Type One is principled, purposeful, self-controlled, and perfectionistic.
  • Type Two is demonstrative, generous, people-pleasing, and possessive.
  • Type Three is adaptive, excelling, driven, and image-conscious.
  • Type Four is expressive, dramatic, self-absorbed, and temperamental.
  • Type Five is perceptive, innovative, secretive, and isolated.
  • Type Six is engaging, responsible, anxious, and suspicious.
  • Type Seven is spontaneous, versatile, distractible, and scattered.
  • Type Eight is self-confident, decisive, willful, and confrontational.
  • Type Nine is receptive, reassuring, agreeable, and complacent.

Tip: A great resource to help you keep track of all your character traits is this Character Trait Chart and Personality Components on WOW!

Monk photo http://techpp.com/2009/08/06/10-ways-to-watch-monk-season-8-online-for-free/
Columbo http://www.ioffer.com/si/compete series?view=0
Matlock http://panel.sygna.pl/matlock-imdb


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You Are Special !

Saturday, February 05, 2011


What do you do during your day? I'm a writer, but I'm also much more. I'm a wife, mother, grandmother, fur-baby mother and a truck driver. I have lots of extended family members, friends and neighbors. Each one of these contacts influences me, and I influence them.

What makes me special? I'm an ordinary old lady. Follow me for a day: I get up from the sleeper that's located in the back of my truck, it may be 5 am or it may be 8 pm or any time in-between, depends on when my husband/partner finishes his shift. I pour my coffee, do my logbook and climb behind the wheel of an eighteen-wheeler. There's time to think while I'm driving and to pray. I talk on the phone, listen to the XM radio, and books on tape or stories on the Kindle. People pass, absorbed in their own little worlds, some on the phone, some chatting with the person next to them, some texting and I've seen some reading the newspaper. Wow—close call. The car just cut me off, not knowing that it takes the length of a football field for me to stop. Vehicles surround me on every side, pushing, nudging, passing, cursing or waving—sometimes with one finger and sometimes using their whole hand. I love it when people blink their lights at me in traffic to allow me to change lanes or give me the honk- the- air horn- sign. Eleven hours later my shift ends. I return to the sleeper to read, watch TV, write or play on the computer.


Of course, different days create different events. I also snap many photographs, play with my dog, walk with my husband, and visit with friends when we get a chance to stop. My time at home is an entirely different world. To me, my life isn't that interesting; it's my day job or it's my family time, yet there are so many golden nuggets and bits of wisdom that I can share with my readers, because I am me and I'm different from everyone else. That makes me interesting. That makes me important.
I spend a lot of my time making notes or recording thoughts. I read that we each have approximately 65,000 thoughts a day. Thoughts are like my days, repetitive and of no particular relevance--then whammy--the greatest idea ever comes to me. Therefore, it's essential to keep your mind clean and open, one way of doing that is to have a place to store things to remember or review later. When I think of stringing ideas together, I always think of the Old Spice I'm on a horse commercial.


That commercial goes to show what a clear mind can achieve. We can be anywhere and do anything we want. We can turn thoughts into diamonds and horses. We can glean golden nuggets from our very own lives. Leave us a comment and tell us what's special in your life? Do you perceive things that others miss?

Image link: http://www.momares.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/old-spice-man-570x318.png
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Hocus-Pocus Focus

Sunday, January 23, 2011


Focus is like hocus-pocus. The day disappears before our very eyes. Hocus-pocus and other such charms were words said as a distraction technique ('busying the senses'). 

Writers perform hocus-pocus. Procrastination, not having the desire to write or no time to write are three things that cause focus lost. The goal is fuzzy, like looking through an out of focus camera lens. Make adjustments to bring goals back into focus. Stop busying your senses.

Procrastination (Things not to do)
  1. Check Facebook every three minutes
  2. Play a quick game (or ten) of Bejeweled or Solitaire.
  3. Watch TV.
  4. Count the snowflakes/raindrops/stars.
  5. Take your third bath of the day.

No Desire to Write
  1. Join a critique group.
  2. Analyze someone else’s work.
  3. Read a novel.
  4. Try a new genre
  5. Use a notebook and pen for a change

No Time to Write
  1. Keep a journal of where you spend your time.
  2. Turn off phone.
  3. Don't connect to the internet.
  4. Write in smaller blocks of time.
  5. Make the writing project easy to access.

Anastasia Pryanikova says procrastination can be productive. Use procrastination to organize your thoughts and assess a situation objectively, to create a time-management system for your future actions, to motivate yourself for success, and to create a mind map of your project. To find out more about productive procrastination go to the Five Ways To Procrastinate With Purpose.

 If a writer has the desire to be successful and prolific, a clear focus on writing needs to be a priority. Another way to stay focused and motivated is to take classes, workshops or work through a writing workbook. Find writing exercises and different ways to hone your skills. Work on more than one project at a time. Momentum plays a big role in writing; start it flowing and keep it flowing. Don't let hocus-pocus slip into your writing life. 

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The Dead of Winter

Saturday, January 08, 2011

In the dead of winter a break from the cold and snow occurs. The sky brightens, the sun shines all day and the temperature rises. This gentle reprieve from the cold inspires me to write poetry. Poetry is an outlet, a way to release inner feelings. I don't believe there is a wrong way to pen posey words. I am aware of common forms and styles used in verse, but there are so many different ways to show expression that it would be nearly impossible to learn them all. Poetry clothes itself in a mini skirt as in a Haiku or it wears a long robe as in Psalms 119; the in-betweens-- the shirts, the pants and the dresses--fill closets. Write a poem for you and if it seems fit share it.

Cocooned in a book or enclosed in a age-yellowed photo album resides a forgotten poem. One penned long ago or one received from a child's youthful days. One of my favorites came from my daughter when she was in the first grade. The uneven scroll of bright green crayon stood out on the pink construction paper heart. It is forever captured under fading yellow scrapbook film and forever alive in my heart.

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I Love you and
I wish I didn't have to go to skool.




Today I wrote this poem reflecting on weather and life.

Daytime Closes

The dazzling sun breaks through the bleak sky to give a reprieve from the cold winter day.
Parents and children molt winter's cocoon from their bodies.
Coats, hats, gloves and boots accumulate in the corner waiting the next storm.
Warm temperatures free the body.
Along the lane, people wash cars, take down outdoor Christmas decorations,
barbeque or go  for a stroll.

Daytime closes; darkness prepares for the chill of a new day.
So it is in winter, so it is in life.

In the middle of the storms of life, the dazzling sun breaks through to give a reprieve.
The mind's cocoon flies open and a fresh attitude appears.
Psyche's amour temporally resides in the corner waiting the next storm.
Along the life's lane, activity bustles. Creativity comes to life, exploring, prodding,
Contemplating or planning the future.

Daytime closes; darkness prepares for the chill of a new day.

I urge you to write and share a poem with us. Short on time, try your hand
at a winter Haiku. It's fun and challenging.




Falling ice droplets
Sidewalks slick and hazardous  
Broken crown likely
.

Icy Walkway photo http://painjurycase.com/Injury_Law_Accident_Lawyer_.html
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Faster than a Speeding Bullet-Character Building

Sunday, October 31, 2010





October is the month for characters. They appear in stores, restaurants, and on the streets; people become anyone they choose to be--from Snow White to Batman or from a Zombie to the President, with lots of characters in between.

Did you become a princess or Dracula? How did it feel to take on that persona? Perhaps you were Dorothy from the Wizard of OZ. Where did those red slippers take you?

Building a character takes that same kind of imagination. The role playing done while we were young can be used in our writing. You felt prettier or stronger when you dressed as your favorite character, and now your protagonist must be bigger and larger than life. She needs to be flashier, wiser, prettier or faster than all the other people in the work of fiction. Remember, faster than a speeding bullet, more powerful than a locomotive, able to leap tall buildings in a single bound.

A writer wants their characters to be memorable. A strong enough character to bring a person to tears when the hero fails or to cause shouts of joy at her accomplishments.

There’s much that goes into building or becoming a character, use these points as a starting place.  

  1. Make them want something. More than anything else, it has to be a strong enough desire to carry them all the way to the end. My last husband was so domineering. How domineering was he? So domineering that I would rather die than be under his thumb ever again.
  2. Give them special qualities. A beautiful voice can work in a lot of situations or a good sense of humor. Find uniqueness.
  3. Inner Conflict gives an insight into who the person is. Mother is ill and she always wanted me to be a Space Cadet. Should I be one for her or should I become the Brain Surgeon that I always wanted to be.  
  4. Outer Conflict is necessary. In order to be strong and to grow challenges have to be met. If there is no conflict, there is no challenge. Two weeks from today I am having a duel with John Wayne Smith, I must sharpen my pistol skills. It’s either kill or be killed.
  5. Humor is good if it’s lightly scattered. A bit of wit and a quick come back are essential parts of character building. Fast and snappy is the key to quick wit. Remember this old example. Lady Astor: “If I were married to you, I’d put poison in your coffee.” Churchill’s Reply: “If I were married to you, I’d drink it.”

Please use the comments section to share with us. What was your favorite character when you were young? What special quality do you feel needs to be included in the list of building a character?





Photo from Wikimedia commons http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Superman
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In the Mood

Saturday, October 09, 2010


As a child, I enjoyed daydreaming and I loved climbing as high as I could in a tree so I could enjoy the total solitude. Sharing my thoughts and feelings with nature, there's a poem  by David McCord called "Every Time I Climb a Tree" and when I read it, I'm instantly transported back to 1962.

In many ways, mood effects writing.  Mood directly relates to what a person writes, where they write and how they write.  Sometimes creativity needs a boost.

Autumn puts me in a day-dreamy mood. I love to sit outside or walk through the woods and …think. Just think. Let my mind go where it will. Listen to the birds, smell the Fall air, crunch the leaves under my feet and dream.

Karle Wilson Baker's poem Days goes like this:

Some days my thoughts are just cocoons-all cold, and dull and blind,
They hang from dripping branches in the grey woods of my mind;

And other days they drift and shine-such free and flying things!
I find the gold-dust in my hair, left by their brushing wings.

Writers are moody creatures. We get in the mood to write and our minds concentrate on the heroine in our next story or we're trying to figure out the best way to kill a really good person.  First, we have to create the person whom everyone loves and deeply cares for, before we knock them off.  In the meantime, life goes on, the phone rings, the baby cries, our husbands demand our attention and we find ourselves getting in a discouraging mood. Finally, we get everything settled down and return to our writing, but now we are not in the mood.  

To get back in the mood, I read poetry, take a walk, listen to music or get a hot cup of coffee, open my blinds and stare out the window—daydreaming. Is there a poem or song that takes you back in time? What do you do to get in the mood? 

Share your thoughts, your memories and your mood in the comments. (Bad moods welcome—good moods appreciated).

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Rachel by Cher'ley Grogg
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