Showing posts with label google. Show all posts
Showing posts with label google. Show all posts

Getting the Setting Details Right in Your Fiction

Wednesday, October 24, 2018
I've recently been researching different items from the late 80s and early 90s. No, I don't mean the 1880s or 1890s--but 25 to 30 years ago in the 1980s and 1990s for my current work-in-progress. And it's so fun to take a trip down memory lane to my college years. My current manuscript tells the story of a woman who is trying to figure out who she is after having her life consumed by a narcissistic man and an alcoholic sister, and that part of the story takes place in 2006. But to understand her and her story, I decided to set several chapters back in college and the "new adult" years (1989-1994).

For example, the other day, I wrote a chapter about my character, Gwen, wanting to veg out and watch some TV. If I set the story today, I would, of course, turn to Netflix or Hulu, but this scene was set in 1993 and summer. So, I googled (my best friend when first researching is always Google) TV shows in 1992 and 1993, and a list of some of my favorites popped up, including Quantum Leap, Northern Exposure and Cheers. I decided Gwen recorded on VHS several episodes of Northern Exposure because her roommate and she watched it all the time--early binge-watching--and I even referred to the actors as the men she wished her boyfriend was like.

Another time, I wrote a paragraph about my main character's sister, sitting in her bean bag on the floor, playing with a Rubik's Cube and watching Gwen talk on the phone with the cord wrapping around a chair. Someone from my writing group said, "If that's not a 90's paragraph, I don't know what is."

When I wrote my historical fiction novel, Finding My Place, set during the Civil War in Vicksburg, Mississippi, I knew that I would have to include several historical details to set the scene and make the characters' lives authentic. But when writing this women's fiction novel, I didn't realize that I would have to "research" so much. It's not really thought of as historical fiction when we set the book in the '80s and '90s, but it actually is. It's important to set the scene in any book, but especially if you are not setting it in contemporary times, without overdoing the description. It's also important to make sure that modern technology doesn't sneak its way in.

In 1865 historical fiction, my 13-year-old main character isn't using a phone or watching TV, so I didn't have to worry about technology sneaking in too soon. But with my current WIP, I'm constantly wondering: what type of cell phone would they have? Would they even have a cell phone yet? How much would a person text if they were using a flip phone as opposed to how much we text with smartphones? And in one scene, my character had to have a camera--remember those days when we used to have to get our photos developed?

It's been fun writing during this time period, but like all research, I have to be careful not to get sucked into the research, remembering shows and movies, looking at 80's fashion and reminiscing about rushing home to see who called and left a message while I was gone.

The important thing I'm realizing is that with any work of fiction, writers have to pick out the details that set the scene naturally and that don't pull readers out of the story. And luckily even if we're writing about 1880 or 1980, we currently have a wonderful resource to double check ourselves right at our fingertips, and we aren't making a trip to the library or dusting off our set of World Book encyclopedias!

Margo L. Dill is a writer, speaker, editor, instructor, and mom, living in St. Louis. You can find out more about her writing on her website here, her editing business here, and the classes she teaches for WOW! here

Rubik's Cube photo by Mike Gonzalez 
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4 For the 4th!

Wednesday, July 04, 2018
Happy 4th of July, y’all! I thought I’d give you four different topics, and in the spirit of the day, feel free to choose one and let me know what you think:

Get a Kick Out of You

I’ll bet when you first started out in your writing journey, you Googled your name regularly. I know I did; I got a kick out of seeing my byline out there on the interwebs, and it seemed important to check what was being said about me. But then the novelty wore off, and now? I run a search on my name mostly when I’m trying to find something I wrote once upon a time.

Which is why I happened to find a couple of surprising gems in a search recently…an author page on Goodreads for an anthology I’m in, a long-forgotten story that I could sell again, a lovely comment someone made about me. So Google your name every once in a while and get a kick out of you!

The Author Page

So you’ve decided to separate your personal page from your Author self on Facebook. There was a time when I thought that was a good idea. But now, not so much.

If you’re writing kidlit or memoirs, historical fiction or romance, you want your friends to read these books, right? You already have that support network in place, and I’m guessing you’re still miles away from that 5,000 friend limit. So rather than ask, nudge, or outright beg your friends to like your Author page, just promote your writing achievements on your own page. But that brings me to managing your personal page…

How To Get People To Ignore You

If you’ve gone overboard on one subject on your favorite social media platform, whether it be politics, food, feel-goods, or felines, please consider dialing it back and throwing a little variety out there. Because if you’re always posting about, say, cats, and I’m not really a cat person (I’m just using the cat thing as an example; I’m not saying anything against cats, so calm down), then the day comes when I’ve had enough. And what happens when your book or article or poem comes out? Yeah, I don’t see it because as I might’ve mentioned, I’m pretty much ignoring you (and the cats).

When Passion Gets Offensive

So you’re passionate about what’s going on in the country, or the world, or the universe, and you are taking a stand, sharing thoughts and articles and whatever on social media. But then one day, you go and say something like, “If you don’t see how this is right/wrong, then unfriend me right now!”

Hmmm…You might’ve just crossed the tolerance line. Because what you are saying is, “I only want friends who think and believe exactly what I think and believe.” And if you engage in argumentative and critically demeaning behavior, you have crossed the line, too. And crossing these lines of respect can cost you friends, friends that were readers and perhaps your biggest supporters!

So take a few minutes to think before your passion makes you post something you’ll regret. Have a hot dog, watch the fireworks, and step back for a moment. Take a day to enjoy a little freedom and happy 4 on the 4th, y’all!

~Cathy C. Hall


Photo by Aaron Schwartz from Pexels


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Your Title: Google It First

Wednesday, July 05, 2017
"Before you decide on a title for your book, Google the options."  

If only I could remember who gave me this piece of advice, but I can’t. What I do remember are the discussions that followed. Basically there were two reasons to Google a potential title.

Obviously, you want to avoid a title that has been used especially if it has been used often. Like me, you’ve probably Googled a title when you're searching for a book. One of my most recent searches was for A Perfect Day, a picture book by Lane Smith. When I popped over to the library catalog and entered the title, I got 520 results. Ugh. I hate it when it gives me everything vaguely related to my search. I’m not sure why but it also searches the book descriptions. But there were also identical titles this time around. I found a movie, an album, an electronic copy of a novel and 3 picture books with the exact same title as well as one picture book with a title that starts with "A Perfect Day..."

The picture book I’m looking for is about a group of animals who are having a perfect day until a bear comes along. The e-book was a psychological thriller. Not horrifying but not  ideal for picture book fans. 

This leads us to the second reason I was given that you should Google your title.  You want to keep young readers from finding a book that is very different and possibly inappropriate.  And that is definitely something to consider.  Most of us have clicked on a title only to discover that . . . Ooooo, that's not what I wanted.

But I've also discovered a third reason to Google your title. You also want to avoid competing media that is similar to your own. 

Recently, a librarian at our local branch recommended The Lemon Tree , a nonfiction account of a Jewish Israeli woman who grew up in the home that a Palestinian family was driven out of as Israel was being formed. The two met when he came to see the house and a sometimes uneasy friendship developed.  The librarian also told me that a movie had been made of the story. She even showed me the DVD.

It turns out that the title of the DVD isn’t exactly the same – it is Lemon Tree vs The Lemon Tree. But seriously? That’s just too close. I say that because my book club read the book. One of the women then watched the movie and discovered that NO it isn’t the same story although the parallels are obvious. The movie is about a Palestinian woman who goes to court to protect her ancestral lemon orchard when an Israeli minister wants to clear the trees.  The two pieces are about the same global area, the same two groups of people and even the same time period.

Two titles that are very close about similar stories. Don’t put your would-be readers in a position where they might pick the wrong piece.

Come up with a title or three and then Google them. Try not to pick something that has been used time and time again. Whether the piece is very different or very similar, it will create needless confusion. Have mercy on your fans!

--SueBE

To find out more about Sue Bradford Edwards' writing, visit her blog, One Writer's Journey.  Sue is also the instructor for Writing Nonfiction for Children and Young Adults. The next session begins August 14th. 
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