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Saturday, January 21, 2012

 

Writing Errors

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Writing errors happen. 

A couple years before I graduated, I met a fellow student in the grad school computer lab. It wasn't until the final months of school that someone told her how she had to format her thesis--she had nearly 700 pages she had typed using a typewriter. In order to meet the graduation requirements, she needed to re-type her entire manuscript and format it as the school required. From her panicked face, I could tell that she would probably have a few errors in her finished thesis.

It was, unfortunately, the nature of the process. Finding errors in one's writing is also the nature of the process of writing.

My master's thesis (a less-than-700-page novel) received comments from a few non-committee readers. For the most part, they were positive comments on a draft that I had re-worked fairly well. However, some of the readers pointed out that I had grammar errors here and punctuation errors there.

Embarrassingly, one glaring error occurred on the first page of my thesis. For someone who believed she had almost error-free writing, it was a humbling experience. (Excuse mode: Admittedly, as one prepares for a thesis defense, formatting enters into the equation more than ever before and sometimes, while one looks at margin spacing, errors creep into the text.)


Errors crop up--even for the most careful of writers. Some are errors of style (unnecessary capitalization) and others are grammar (split infinitive anyone?). Others may be continuity issues--Jude in chapter one is referred to as Jim in chapter six. Often a writer is consistent in the errors made (which makes it easier to edit) and, then again, the writer is widely inconsistent in the errors cropping up (a bear to edit).

So when are the errors too many errors? Lately I've been reading a few editors discuss this subject. No one has a good answer--there is no golden number or glaring error that sends up a red flag.

But for me, there are too many errors in someone's writing when the reader is pulled out of the story because the errors are jarring and makes the reader leave the story to figure out what the writer meant.

If I am finding lots of errors, I stop reading the plot and start looking for errors. In one particular published novel, there were a couple errors that were whopping. (Feet instead of inches errors. Yes, I sent an email to the publisher.) 

So, if you have a reader who can't get past the first few errors on the early pages, maybe you've found someone to edit your work. 

What errors do you notice in your writing? What errors do you notice in the writing of others?


Elizabeth King Humphrey is a writer (who makes errors) and an editor (who tries not to err). Regardless, she's on Twitter @Eliz_Humphrey.




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6 Comments:

Anonymous T.K. Marnell said...

Since I'm self-publishing, I have to be extra careful of errors in my work. I thought I had an excellent eye for grammar, and I pored over the manuscript at least a dozen times before sending it off, but I'm on my final proof and still finding doozies! Doozies that may not bother the average reader, but anyone with a critical eye would zero in on them straightaway. At least I think I've eradicated all of the headdesk-inducing ones, like "She wiped the glass with the coat of her sleeve" :o

1:57 AM  
Anonymous Linda M. Rhinehart Neas said...

Great post, Elizabeth! I have had such a tough time with mistakes (Spelling and Grammar) because of a learning difficulty that never got diagnosed until I was adult. I have developed skills to recognize my pitfalls, but I still leave out commas or put them in where they don't belong. One of my pet peeves is when someone opens a sentence with a phrase and they don't put in a comma. (i.e. As of today, we will correct out mistakes.)Another is not using an apostrophe for the possessive. (i.e. It is Micheal's not Micheals or St. Mary's not St. Marys.)
Because of my difficulty, as an editor, I have compassion for my writers. I try to instruct them in ways to "see" their mistakes before they submit by making a list of the errors they make most often to check against their work.

7:25 AM  
Anonymous Margo Dill said...

@T.K. I love your last example about the coat of the sleeve. I actually had to read it twice before my mind realized there was an error and should be sleeve of my coat. LOL.

I think that is what happens so often to writers who do know the rules--we read so fast or we know what we want it to say that our minds don't even catch the mistakes.

I've heard to read your ms backwards. Can you imagine?

Just recently when editing for WOW!, a writer whom I know knows her rules put a YOU'RE instead of a YOUR. I read the article twice and didn't catch it when editing. Angela actually wrote to me and said, "Isn't it supposed to be YOUR?" I guess doubting since the writer and I BOTH missed it. (Right, Ang?) But that's how mistakes happen.

When you get really famous, like Stephen King, there are entire websites dedicated to all the mistakes in your novels. Isn't he lucky?

Love this post, Elizabeth. I'm going to share it on my Editor 911 page on Facebook.

8:48 AM  
OpenID moonbridgebooks.com said...

You really can't do a good edit on your own work because your mind sees what you meant to say. I'm proofing a final manu that has been through a number of eyes and one editor and finding a lot of little errors, not too bad re spelling, but inconsistencies in formatting certain terms, wrong character names (yikes!). Kinda scary.

12:06 PM  
Blogger CharmedLassie said...

Hmm, errors in books I generally forgive - I don't know why! It's more when I see errors (especially wrong apostrophe usage) in blog posts or on author websites that I take a role in the grammar police. If a writer can't even control the spelling and grammar on their own website, I won't be reading a book by them any time soon. (And, yes, I know there are probably mistakes on my own blog but I'm not claiming to *be* anyone yet!)

10:07 AM  
Anonymous Karen Doniere said...

Great article Elizabeth! I usually don't run across errors in books/novels. In my writing, I have a tendency to switch verb tense and misuse 'that' often. I'm making an honest effort to improve. I wouldn't dare edit my own manuscript because the eyes are tricky. Thus, having a great editor is necessary.

6:15 AM  

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